Request for Yoshigirl

[Raz Yoshi]

Here's another picture I did as part of my "10 sketches" dealie on DevArt. This is Yoshigirl
Here's the link and the pic: Enjoy =3
www.deviantart.com/deviation/40778690/

[Zippy]

Very nicely done. I like the smooth outlining, it's easy to look at. I also like how nice that shading is.
Awesome Job!

[Raz Yoshi]

Thanks. "Easy to look at," I really like that description.

[Teo]

Foxy XD *bricked*

I really like the positioning of this. The arms holding the hammer behind the neck like that... just seems so natural. The waiting around kind of pose just seems to be realistic in this pic... I'll say, nice job!!

Only critique I have is maybe a tid-bit of shading on the hammer, and although I'm not sure about this one, different legs? I'm REALLY not sure about changing the legs or if it'll be any better or not...but just throwing it out there.

[penguinyoshi]

IF the tale blends how come the ears dont

[Raz Yoshi]

As far as I know fox ears don't bend...they can camber down but they don't bend. Also I did not design this character so certain specifics might be better answered by someone else.

[penguinyoshi]

bLend not bend

[Raz Yoshi]

My mistake ^^,
I dunno, i just didn't feel that they should.

[penguinyoshi]

OK that makes since

[Yoshi4ever]

It looks great, just one thing i would like to point out. The hammer kinda looks 2d.
I took a class on perspective once, its very helpfull in 3d drawings. Instead of doing the hard way, trying to make things look 3d and trying to avoid making it look unrealistic, there is a definite way to make object 3d in a picture.
Now, sorry if you know all this, just skip, might be helpfull though.

Start with a simple square, easiest shape to do. Put a 'vanishing' point either at the top or the side.



Draw lines from the edges that would make up the different sides you could see if it was 3d



then, 'end' the figure by drawing lines parallel to the original 'begining lines'.



Erase the old lines and you have the figure, and other 3d objects vanish to the same point. They could be 1 point or 2 point, depending on the perspective. You can do it with any shapes, such as your hammer there. Its a great way to make more real looking 3d objects.

I hope this helps!

(quick example of two point perspective)

If you already knew all this, sorry for the nuisance. Hope this atleast helps someone who reads it.