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Post by plebanshiren on Nov 16, 2006 16:36:14 GMT -5
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Post by Yoshifrog on Nov 16, 2006 20:15:19 GMT -5
Eeee TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! ! Sooo cute. You've got the style down perfect. You're like the Teh in training :3
You are getting so amazingly good at landscape. Shiney trees Double-scoop ice cream
I have no critique except he looks a little smooshed. Buuut, the rest of the picture is awesome. I give an A+ :D
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Nov 16, 2006 20:45:49 GMT -5
Haha, I like the idea. And the hat as a parachute is pretty clever.
The background is awesome. Keep up the good work on those.
I agree with Yoshifrog that you look kinda stretched, but that might be the perspective. And one more thing; the highlights in your eyes are... pretty big. Unless your eyes are closed, heheh.
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Post by Zippy on Nov 16, 2006 21:01:21 GMT -5
Looks like you hat is not only head attire, but it's also a handy dandy gadget to thrill and save you. Oooo, I really like that background. The use of solid colors instead of blends is nice looking, but why isn't the character himself shaded? Hey, I see that little dude thing by your foot there. XD
Awesome Job!
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Post by Anjil on Nov 17, 2006 0:40:04 GMT -5
Wow, very nice, like I said on dA! You really nailed the Yoshi's Island background and character styles. The trees and mountains remind me of World 4, one of my favorites! Sweet work~ ;D
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Post by Teo on Nov 17, 2006 0:52:26 GMT -5
Woah nelly...
Teh in training just about hits the spot.
I am so admiring those trees... they look so realistic... well not realistic, but... YOU GET WHAT I MEAN!!
The hat idea was definitely excellent, it is incredibly original and... well, that's all I have to say there!
You did Pleb very well too! Except for maybe the eyes, the nose-slits, and something about him... he looks a bit... I don't know. Maybe some shading on him woulda been good?
And that's my two cents.
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Post by plebanshiren on Nov 17, 2006 12:28:01 GMT -5
Teh in training just about hits the spot. ...hehe, sounds good, I'd rather not be reffered to by that though LEVEL UP ! !I thank you all for the positive C+C I've tried to fix up some of the problems (i.e stretched out the picture, altered the eyes ect. ) As I've said before this is going towards the YI style, therefore the yoshi does not have shading, if it did then it wouldn't be like that of the YI style, besides I suck at yoshi shading LEVEL UP ! ! |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Nov 17, 2006 17:23:02 GMT -5
I adjusted the eyes and the text and also stretched it out so that it didn't look so smooshey. Spleee TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! ! That's much better. I liked the other eyes because they matched the yoshi's island style more, but it's cute nonetheless :3 |
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Post by Stevoshi on Nov 17, 2006 17:42:21 GMT -5
I think it looks very artfull. (that just came to me too! XD) I'm not sure what that means either but trust me it's very good!!! The scenery is very eye-grabbing, and the Yoshi is very realistic. The little scrib adds a nice touch. Here's an idea, move the "to" down a line and then "by" and "hi" will rhyme! Aren't I clever?  |
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Post by sakura on Nov 18, 2006 10:50:29 GMT -5
I love how you color your backgrounds :3
and your yoshis are adorable!! ^^
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