A few doodles

[Lord of the Dance]

Yeah, I draw a little at school- during Study Hall, of course.
If you look hard enough you can see a bit of giftart in there. I have about fifty more pages of these, but those ones are older :<

On the top is a Chaofied Gem, since I promised her something better, haha. She's wondering why.
On the bottom-left is Kyrel Koopa. In new colors.
And then next to Kyrel is Champ, looking a bit... older? I'm trying to get the whiskers to look right. And I'm failing.


On the top is my friend (the one in the 'stache) and me. The moustache is an inside joke, haha. She forgot what Fig Newtons were and tried to guess. I tried doing something new with her moustache, but it didn't really work.
Beneath the two of us is a Koopa girl I came up with a few weeks ago. I hadn't worked out her color scheme yet, so this picture made me happy. I haven't quite figured out a name yet...
Next to her is Teo, chuckling about something or other.
Below Teo is Gwen, the mechanic. My orange pencil ran out of lead, and I had been drawing Koopas all week, so she came out looking kinda funny. Oh well.

Critiques would be very nice. I was experimenting a lot in these two pages and I would like to see if it's coming out okay.

[Potwin]

Well i don't hav any critiques, exept some:
no colors, doesn'tt he yoshi eyes hurt when hat on, the other pages pictures can be seen.
Well those are somethings that don't even matter :3
Becouse that is just so cute! :F

[plebanshiren]

I love the confused expression on Gems face and the one with the Newt figgons (ain't it fig newtons? 0o ) one is randomly funny XD Great work! The only thing I can say is that Kyrels' head looks alittle small in proportion to the rest of his body. other than that, they all look pretty decent, keep it up!