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Post by Yin on Feb 10, 2007 17:44:22 GMT -5
Yeah, I got around to draw a yoshi on the computer again. I thought I would draw Yin because I changed her look a little bit and some people say they never saw my character, so might as well.  DA versionI did the character on MS paint and the background on Microsoft Greetings. It's my first time drawing on that program so the background may look strange okay? Critiques please! |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Feb 11, 2007 14:18:22 GMT -5
Whoo, your style's changed. I like the hat and the angle, and the background looks like one of those oriental gardens ;D
I like the shading on the jacket, too.
You should use Microsoft Greetings more, haha. It makes your art stand out more from other people's.
It looks like Yin's not casting a shadow, though. Can you darken the area around her so it looks like she's actually standing in the scene. She also seems to be lacking spikes...?
One more thing, haha. When Yin's holding the knife like that, it seems as if she's about to stab herself. Maybe have it coming up behind her head or something next time.
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Post by Yin on Feb 11, 2007 15:24:02 GMT -5
Yeah, I was focusing more on the shading and experimenting on the background then the actual composition. I totally forgot the shadow and I almost never draw the spikes, never. 'Cuz I'm like that. LEVEL UP ! ! Thanks for the critique anyway.
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