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Post by PinkFloydYoshi on Mar 12, 2005 22:09:27 GMT -5
As always, I'm after critique on my work, so I've decided to do the round of my forums, getting what everyone feels on this fine specimen(fine in my eyes). deviantArt's members posted some things I can alter on it such as the position of the arms, ripples on the water, mountains and other little things. I've catered for them, and now seek more constructive critisism. Whadda ya reckon? www.spyro24uk.com/byof_02_01_dA.jpg |
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Post by Graedius on Mar 14, 2005 2:30:34 GMT -5
Mrr, I love dragons!
Mrr, this is great, man! Very few 3D artists out there do I know.
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Post by moshi5694 on Mar 17, 2005 18:23:51 GMT -5
Love them!I live,breath and sleep them!Nice pic by the way.  |
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Post by Chaos on Mar 17, 2005 18:58:34 GMT -5
dude! that thing looks really cool! i mean,, like .... really cool! i mean how can you do something this good man?i give it 10/10 and then some more! the only thing i can see that can use a little more work is the toes. those tiny toes cant hold up a huge thing like thta very weell. but thats the only thing!
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Post by PinkFloydYoshi on Mar 17, 2005 19:55:26 GMT -5
Ah, the legs themselves are a lot bigger than that, so it's capable of holding the weight. The model was bought from a 3D modelling site called DAZ3D, so, the modelling was upto them, heh. Screenshots of the full body: www.spyro24uk.com/crap/ss1.jpgwww.spyro24uk.com/crap/ss2.jpgIt's not a rendered model, just one quickly adjusted so you can see from the sidehow it's able to support itself. I added it's armour to do the dA id on my deviantArt page. The model is very complex. The head itself has over 100 different adjustable factors to it. Hopefully, as I do different things in these programs, i'll learn to move onto the more complex things such as making models. I've always wanted to make a model of Yoshi. I could do some really nifty Yoshi wallpapers then. Thanks for the comments, they're really appreciated! I do take any critique seriously though, and I'll alter it to reflect those changes. |
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Post by red.yoshi on Mar 17, 2005 21:31:16 GMT -5
wow, thats great...
wow, thats great...
wow, thats great...
thats awsome! somehow semes familier...you did another one of these for your sig on tyfn? (i dont know if its your sig there anymore...)
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Post by PinkFloydYoshi on Mar 17, 2005 21:34:25 GMT -5
It's not, no, Infact, that's a very early sig. Early last year sometime. Same model, 'cept now, with the bumps in the skin, where they should be. That was the one thing the one person sending in critisism for the first one, pointed out. The shine on the skin of the dragon. So I learned how to manipulate 'Bump maps' and inserted it. Rendered, and it looked really nice. Thing is, looks nicer inside of Poser. (The application I use to 'pose' the dragon. To take a look at what he mentioned, and see how well I altered the picture to get to where it is now, take a look at the page for the first 'Being your own fantasy'. www.deviantart.com/view/14664584/ |
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Post by CherryBlossom on Mar 18, 2005 17:22:08 GMT -5
Your picture is really good .... it is something that i would never be able to do.. The water looks great  |
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