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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Nov 25, 2006 14:34:36 GMT -5
 www.deviantart.com/deviation/43644512/(For some reason, I can't see it in my gallery, what the heck?!) ~Description~ -Silver Form Jay With the help of his Dragon ancestor "Silver," Jay can obtain this form and use it anytime that it is needed, with or without Silver's help in the future. In this form, Jay's abilities increase and is able to use more different elemental magic: Electric, Dark, Light, Non, Spiritual, Fire, and of course Wind.(Note, that is still a bit imcomplete, and changes are possible) ~My comment on this picture...~ *sigh* well...I have to say, this isn't the best I done. Well I just got back to using Photoshop, so I'm a bit rusty on a few things, and well, I don't have that... "Artist Feeling" inside, so I wasn't able to make it a lot better, hell, I say this picture does kind of suck...But, I wanted to finish it soon, so that's what I did, no I didn't rush, btw. I'm going to practice a bit more ASAP and hopefully get better...I hope. I have to admit, I did do a OK job, I like how the hair came out, and the eyes to. Also, I was trying that...logo thing, how did that go? It's up to you, that was a bit of practice.... Well, until the next picture, I'm not accepting criticism, sorry, but I know I could've done better. |
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Post by Zippy on Nov 25, 2006 22:46:45 GMT -5
Ooo, it's colored now. I like this form and it's nice to finally see it in it's color without having to picture it. Looks great!
Awesome Job!
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Post by on Nov 26, 2006 17:44:10 GMT -5
Oh wow... this is awesome! See what I mean? He IS better than Shiron! XD Superb job on this! This form looks sweet!  |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Nov 27, 2006 22:22:51 GMT -5
The design of the character and the background look great. The way you drew the wings also went well with the picture, and your proportions are looking good.
You probably could have done a bit better on the shading, though, and I noticed that you hardly ever use different poses. Might want want to try a new angle in your next picture, or a different pose.
Oops, you said no criticism. Sorry.
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Nov 28, 2006 12:26:04 GMT -5
The design of the character and the background look great. The way you drew the wings also went well with the picture, and your proportions are looking good. You probably could have done a bit better on the shading, though, and I noticed that you hardly ever use different poses. Might want want to try a new angle in your next picture, or a different pose.Oops, you said no criticism. Sorry. Meh, I might as well take that no critcism thing off, I don't mind crticism anymore. Thanks for the advice. I seem to have a problem with posing. No matter if I practice or not, I somehow screw up. I going to try and get a sketch book and practice when I can, but...I don't know, something's wrong, I. Can't. Pose. Regardless. I really need some help on it... |
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Post by Rackinac on Nov 28, 2006 17:03:34 GMT -5
Have you tried basic shapes or an action line? They help greatly in posing, and if you don't know what they are I can always make a short tutorial. Well, basic shapes are circles, triangles, squares, and rectangles that help show the basic body shape when you then add all the stuff and erase the basic shapes. Action lines are a bit harder to explain, but it shows how the body is leaning and gives it a more moving look than the straight motionless look. Also, placing light in other areas besides light hitting him in the face, try the back, above, or even below or at an angle.
Besides that, I'm loving the detailed design and colour-scheme. I wish I could make detailed characters and be able to draw them the same agian. :<
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