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Post by Yoshifrog on Feb 26, 2007 18:35:29 GMT -5
This was drawn on ripped crumpled paper. But he's just too cute :3Critique is extremely welcome. Edit: just to clear up any confusion, the puppy's feet are on the ground.  |
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XanDer
Junior Yoshi
Xander? Who is that reptile?
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Post by XanDer on Feb 27, 2007 14:59:30 GMT -5
OHHH! SO Cutie!! ;D I love it
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Post by Kimmorz on Feb 28, 2007 20:21:08 GMT -5
How cute!~ I really love how you did the nose and the eye, like- a LOT. Good work~ :3
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Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 1, 2007 19:47:00 GMT -5
Thanksandthanks :9
He's totally got, like, a lion eye rawr.
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Post by Rackinac on Mar 5, 2007 14:22:40 GMT -5
I'll start out with the good stuff. I really like the fur on it's neck. I don't know why. It's just so... fuzzy. I also like how the collar just doesn't simply go around the neck, it looks loose which is better than a skin tight looking collar. What's really bugging me is the feet. They should look as if dangling, but looks like it's standing. Maybe if the feet pointed downward instead of at the viewer, it'll look better. Same with the tail. Instead of pointing sideways, make it point down. I know it's just a doodle, but tips won't hurt. ^^
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Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 5, 2007 15:09:31 GMT -5
What's really bugging me is the feet. They should look as if dangling, but looks like it's standing. Maybe if the feet pointed downward instead of at the viewer, it'll look better. Same with the tail. Instead of pointing sideways, make it point down. I know it's just a doodle, but tips won't hurt. ^^ I'm sorry it's hard to see, but he actually is standing on the ground. He has got his front paws on the branch, holding himself up, and the bottom ones flat on the ground- or else he wouldn't look as if he is holding himself up there effortlessly. Other people have said that same thing, anyway. I shouldn't have made the ground so hard to see. And thanks for the comments ^^ |
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Post by roshie on Mar 6, 2007 15:14:59 GMT -5
Oh, this is nice, but ill pass on the butterfly. It looks kind of blurry, I know i use critique on the littlest things, but they also are the heart of the art. =) (dont shoot me)
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Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 6, 2007 21:19:46 GMT -5
Oh, this is nice, but ill pass on the butterfly. It looks kind of blurry, I know i use critique on the littlest things, but they also are the heart of the art. =) (dont shoot me) Haha, I have a suckie scanner. The butterfly was a last minute add-in, I didn't spend much time on it. Thanks :] |
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Post by roshie on Mar 7, 2007 14:49:34 GMT -5
Also, this does remind me of Graedius, ever wondered where he went? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- What's really bugging me is the feet. They should look as if dangling, but looks like it's standing. Maybe if the feet pointed downward instead of at the viewer, it'll look better. Same with the tail. Instead of pointing sideways, make it point down. This problem is actually solved by adding more detail to the ground, it usually helps. |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 15, 2007 21:23:39 GMT -5
Also, this does remind me of Graedius, ever wondered where he went? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- What's really bugging me is the feet. They should look as if dangling, but looks like it's standing. Maybe if the feet pointed downward instead of at the viewer, it'll look better. Same with the tail. Instead of pointing sideways, make it point down. This problem is actually solved by adding more detail to the ground, it usually helps. I think Graedius left a while back. It's a shame :( Yeah. I'm really not big on backgrounds, so the ground is normally just a faint line /: |
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