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Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 9, 2007 20:37:33 GMT -5
 Splandrew. Enoy~ :3 Edit: Look at my creativity. Wow.  |
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Post by Yin on Mar 9, 2007 22:29:37 GMT -5
Quite a cute looking emo guy you got there. I think this is the first time I've ever seen you drawn a human, as if I ever remembered anything well at all. XD
Comments: The shading on the hair is nice and color choices are very well suited to the character. The folds in the clothing are all very realistic. The way you draw hands and the eyes are very good too!
Critique: Because of the lack of ears, the eyeglasses seem to float in midair. From the front, you wouldn't really see the long parts over the ears, which is hard. Try your best to make the glasses look as recognizable as you can from the front without exaggerating parts not actually seen.
I love how you drew the palms facing forward but I can't tell what he is doing. It's only minor but I was wondering.
There seems to be a lump over on his right (our left) shoulder and doesn't seem to connect to his arm. The shirt might be too dark for me to see the lines so I can't tell if it's supposed to be hoodie or not.
There are some leftover sketch lines along his chin and a red dot above the rim of his glasses but I had to squint to see those so make sure to throughly clean the sketch before coloring.
And that concludes my thoughts and analysis of your picture! Phew!
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Post by Not-Garr on Mar 10, 2007 3:19:54 GMT -5
That's scary 'cause he almost looks like my real-life self given straight hair, a facial hair shave, and turned into an emo. .______. And my naaame~
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Post by roshie on Mar 10, 2007 3:42:53 GMT -5
Now i know your andrew (character), whee.
The first pic was messy, but everything else was good.
haha.
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Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 10, 2007 14:23:15 GMT -5
There seems to be a lump over on his right (our left) shoulder and doesn't seem to connect to his arm. The shirt might be too dark for me to see the lines so I can't tell if it's supposed to be hoodie or not. It is a hoodie. Thanks for the crits :3 As for the wierd hand postioning- I didn't want to redraw the hands. I wanted to show how you could use the lineart in a picture, also. It does look pretty wierd- I noticed that before I submitted it. My favorite name. You name steeeeeealerrr. Now i know your andrew, whee. haha. You mean my name? I'm Jill. And ironicly I dropped a nerd under my J key, so I have to like pound it to get it to type. Ha-thank-you Thanks everybody. |
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Post by roshie on Mar 10, 2007 15:55:21 GMT -5
Andrew as in character, heh. =D
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