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Post by Lord of the Dance on Dec 19, 2005 23:04:06 GMT -5
You don't want to threaten Champ... XD. *breaks ropes and destroys them all* =P
Great job so far, Leo! I love the way this story is coming! It's been keeping me on the edge of my seat!
Just a word of advice: Before you post, read over your writing to make sure you fix those little typoes. They don't hinder the story, but they're kind of distracting.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 20, 2005 10:23:40 GMT -5
Yay, we finally reach Yoshee and Enrique in time! Let's teach those senior ba*****s a lesson! Oops, language  ... And you, cowardly principal! Nyah nyah!! ;D If you're so big and bad, why don't YOU fight Mosh and John? Heheheh. |
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Post by Johnyoshi on Dec 20, 2005 15:48:19 GMT -5
hmm, another great chapter Leo
I wonder if this would be a good rp
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 20, 2005 22:34:23 GMT -5
I have considered making it an RP, but if it does, It may end up going in the wrong direction or die for lack of posts. I may do an RP based on this, but as of now, I'd rather keep it under my control for that sake. Sorry if that's a little too controlling, but I just want to keep it going at a steady and focused pace.
Edit: I went back and tried to fix my previous typos, the ones I could spot anyway.
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Moshi's fist came into contact with the unfortunate minion. He gave a grunt and flew backward. As Moshi looked behind her, she spotted another two grab her.
Moshi jumped into the air and flapped her wings, forcing them both off. They gave out a yell and both fell back down to the floor.
She saw even more approaching with swords. Moshi growled and created dark energy within her hand. She quickly began to fire balls of dark energy from both hands, mercilessly hitting her opponents.
Even more where rushing her from all directions: The doorway, the windows, some where coming from the vents.
"How many thugs does he have?" Moshi asked as she delivered a right hook to another. "...no matter. I'll take them all on. They don't have a chance."
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Johnyoshi, however, managed to escape the melee. He wasn't interested in beating up bad guys. He knew he could end it sooner if he could just reach the principal. Johnyoshi ran from the room and spotted the Principal running down the hallway.
"Where do you think you're going?" John asked, rushing to catch up.
The Principal looked back and sneered. John growled in response.
"He want me to follow him." John said. "Well, you won't scare me. Nothing will anymore!"
He began to pick up the pace, rushing with all his speed to reach the Principal. He watched as the man ran into a door marked "Escape." Johnyoshi followed through the door.
John suddenly realized why he was lured to this place. He now stood in a fire escape. Nothing but a little metal platform. That's all that protected him from an 80 floor plummet to the city streets.
But all of this distracted John. The principal laughed and grabbed him. With a strong swing, he thrusted John against the brick wall of the building, then the metal railing on the fire escape.
"End of the line." the principal said.
John looked back down the drop. He gave a panicked squeak before looking back at the evil man's face.
"You would throw one you where dedicated to help educate to his grave?" John asked. His eyes narrowed. "You horrible man. This is unforgivable!"
"If I wanted you opinion, I'd of asked for it!" the principal shouted.
"Yeah? Take this!" John shouted. He suddenly kicked backward. The principal shouted and released John. John got to his feet, and held out both fists.
The principal shouted. "To think I once considered you a top student!"
"I will defend what is important to me." John said. In a martial arts-esque move, he signaled the principal to come.
"You want to play that game, huh?" The principal shouted. He held out both fists and gave a yell as he threw a punch at John. John gasped and ducked before the fist could make contact. John kicked in a circle around him. The principal responded by jumped and grabbing a ledge above himself.
"This will be a long fight." John thought.
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"Come to save your friend, have you?" the one with the strange symbol on his shirt asked.
Leoshi looked at the symbol. "WAIT!" he thought. "That looks like an ancient symbol, like the book?... but how? ...who is this?"
"I will make it easier for us all." the strange one said. "You tell me what you know about that book, or I'll be forced to pry it from your defeated hands."
The other seniors in the room began to murmur when they heard about the book.
"We can take you!" Teo said.
"Wait!" Yin shouted.
The one with the symbol noticed Yin. He looked a little happy, for some reason.
"What's up?" Yapi asked.
"You there." Yin said. "Reveal your weapon!"
The other one looked surprised. He reached into his pocket and held a small but deadly item.
"That's a ninja knife!" Lava shouted.
"It's a kunei knife, Lava." Yin corrected. "But only those trained in a special form of Ninjustu possess such a thing."
"Well, we aren't as dumb as I thought." the other one said.
"For example." Yin said. "It took me a while to figure it out, but that symbol on your shirt. It stands for "Demon.""
Yoshifrog looked very worried. "So does that make him..."
"You may call me that as a name." the strange one said.
"Well, Demon or not, you can't get this book!" Leoshi shouted.
Demon gave him an angry look. "You are in no position to demand. We have hostages, and can take them out whenever we so desire."
"You wouldn't dare!" Yapi shouted.
"You're rotten!" Teo shouted.
"What is your course of action?" Demon asked. "We are waiting."
"...we will fight." Leoshi said. "And we will save them, not matter what happens! You will not get away with this!"
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Yeah, kind of short. The next one will have alot of action
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Post by Enrique on Dec 21, 2005 11:55:25 GMT -5
I can't wait to see the next part. I'm ready for the fight! Even though I'm still unconcious. =P
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 21, 2005 21:00:56 GMT -5
...you know, now I'm really wondering. Should I make an RP based of this story (because now that I think of it, this could make an intresting one)
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Post by moshi5694 on Dec 21, 2005 21:08:16 GMT -5
I think you should make it an RPG after the story. I dunno why....
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 21, 2005 21:10:17 GMT -5
yeah, you right. I was just saying, because the story won't be over for a while
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Post by Enrique on Dec 21, 2005 21:16:48 GMT -5
It would be a good idea. Based on the popularity of this story, if you did create an RP based on this story, it would be very popular, and it will probably be a long-lasting one too.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 22, 2005 20:23:45 GMT -5
This is good! But I still wonder...
Why are the seniors acting as minions?
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 22, 2005 22:32:46 GMT -5
we'll just have to see, won't we? And with that, here's my next part:
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Moshi looked at the army of minions rushing her. She gave them all a stare.
"Give it up, little one. We have you surrounded!" one of them shouted.
Moshi laughed. The others around her began to murmur.
"Why does this one not cower before us?" one of the minions asked.
"Me? Cower before you?" Moshi asked. "You must be joking. I haven't even used half of my ability yet... I could very easily destroy you all in one blast, but what fun would that be?"
"You think this is a game, child?" the minions asked. "You are meddling in a war of 3,000 years! You should best surrender now before you get yourself killed.
"I have had enough of talk!" Moshi shouted.
"As you wish." the minion said. All of them suddenly reached into their robes and pulled out swords. They gave an intimidating shine as they where unsheathed, each one held mere inches from Moshi's face. Moshi starred back at her reflection in a sword. She looked bold and determined.
"Why won't you surrender?" the minions asked.
"I have my reasons!" Moshi shouted.
"Do yourself a favor and leave this, little girl. You aren't nearly as strong as you think." they said.
Moshi closed her eyes. She gave a sigh, and went silent for a moment.
When they opened up again, they where glowing a dark purple color. She gave a growl as her hands clutched at her side. "What? You dare to call me weak?!"
The minions began to back away from Moshi.
Moshi's entire body began to glow. "I'll show you real power!!"
Suddenly, her form began to change. She was becoming larger and larger, his body twisting and turning in rapid successions. Her growling became distorted, as her eyes began to glow from purple to a piecing red.
The minions took a few steps backward, but held their weapons firmly. They watched as the transformation seemed to reach completion... but the one named Moshi was different.
Where she once stood before, now was an enormous dragon, it's skin a greenish color. It barley fit in the room. Her large form looked very enraged, ready to attack with every once of energy in her body.
The minions all charged with their shining swords in hand, with battle cries. Moshi's dragon form gave a loud roar, then charged back toward them...
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"Hold still!!" The principal shouted. Johnyoshi looked at the principal, holding out both fists and ready to strike.
The principal jumped from the ledge right toward John. He was unable to protect himself, and took the hit. The principal, tossed John off him. His small body struck the railing with a loud clang sound. John was forced to look over the edge to see the huge drop he would suffer if he made a mistake.
The principal gave a battle cry and rushed John. He looked back and saw the principal's mad face.
John extended his foot and allowed the principal to hit it. He gave a loud yell and fell backward. The principal's body hit the hall, then got back up on his feet.
"Why isn't he down yet?" John thought.
Suddenly, he saw an explosion. He and the principal watched as the roof burst off the building top. They could hear the shouts of the minions.
"What's this?" the principal asked.
From the new hole, they spotted Moshi fly from the top in dragon form.
"My warriors, defeated by one person?" The principal asked. "...who is she?"
"It won;t mean anything now!" John shouted. In that second, he used Moshi as a distraction to take the principal off guard. His wrapped his hands around the principal's body, trying to pin him down.
But John would prove no match for the principal's strength. He was suddenly lifted above the man, at his mercy.
John gave a gasp as he saw himself being held over the city streets. He tried to break free, but failed as he felt himself being released. He gave a yell as he began his decent.
"Ha ha ha..." the principal gave an evil laugh. "That fool was in over his head."
He turned to walk back toward the doorway, when he suddenly saw two figures flying from the streets. The principal gasped as he saw them fly past.
"So long, sucker!" Moshi's voice shouted as they flew past.
"NOOOOOOOOOOO!!" The principal shouted.
Moshi was flying with her large wings in her Yoshi form. She held John as she flew.
"...why did you save me?" John asked. "I thought you-"
"Our business is not complete. It would have hindered my plans if you hadn't made it." Moshi said.
John sighed. "Thanks."
Moshi didn't respond. Now she had a new task to complete. Find the others and find the book.
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Yep. I'll get back toward the other characters in the next one.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 22, 2005 22:37:11 GMT -5
*snif* Cool...This bond between John and Mosh is almost like in Nate's Adventure RPGs...
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Post by Enrique on Dec 22, 2005 22:41:43 GMT -5
Pretty neat chapter, despite the fact that it was a little shorter than previous ones. I see a huge fight starting to occur...
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 22, 2005 22:43:32 GMT -5
yeah, it's all I could think of for now. I'll get the next one up soon
PS: I'm not familair with "Nate's Adventures RPG," so I'm not trying to base it off of anything
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 22, 2005 22:46:57 GMT -5
Never said you were. Just said that it reminded me of something before you came. It's probably deep in the RP section, and probably locked.
Most likely.
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Post by Teo on Dec 23, 2005 2:32:08 GMT -5
I haven't read these in a while, I'm behind!!
All the same, I still wanna read more...and more...and...well, MORE!!
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Post by moshi5694 on Dec 23, 2005 6:36:51 GMT -5
NOT B/F and G/F!!!! *explodes* XD This was a good chapter. A little short, but good.
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Post by Yin on Dec 23, 2005 14:13:47 GMT -5
Man these are still getting very good. Oh yeah the part with John and Moshi,
Whenever someone brings that little moment in NARPG up it has me laughing uncontrollably. Really.
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Post by moshi5694 on Dec 23, 2005 15:45:39 GMT -5
Man these are still getting very good. Oh yeah the part with John and Moshi, Whenever someone brings that little moment in NARPG up it has me laughing uncontrollably. Really. *takles Yin* << >> You didn't see anything...... |
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Post by Johnyoshi on Dec 23, 2005 15:56:43 GMT -5
yeah this is kinda like NARPG when I said I like her...very interesting, well I had to add some romance! Nice chapter Leo Edit: for all who don't know NARPG I'll give you the exact posts of it..... John:I got burnt but was still ready,I grab another AK-47 and pointed them at Moshi and Coco,"Alright,This will be your...."My right hand was shaking that was aiming at Moshi Moshi: *Catches Yin*Owch!I rapped 2 shredded pieces of cloth and wraped them around my hands.Great,just great.I try and I try to turn into a dragon.I could only mantain the wings.Good enough.I grabed 2 katana and went for Johnyoshi. John:I closed my eyes," Why am i love with her??",I opened them and see Moshi going to hit me with the swords,I grab the front of the swords and grab them as it hurt my hands badly,"AHHH!!",i broke the swords Moshi: My katana!*has enough energy to turn into a dragon*Grrrr. John: "I can't believe I love her,I can't fight her!!",I put a surrender stand,"I surrender" Moshi: Is this some sort of trick? John:"No!,It cause I love you",Every guard laugh at me,"I can't believe i did this" Moshi: Stop lieing*uses Shdow rush* Yin: I sunndenly woke up "OMG. I can believe what am I hearing." I walk away with a pale face."I going to find a place to thow up." Moshi:  How could he be that strong?Ow.The burns on my arms and legs weren't helping.*grabs John in my giant claws.* Yin: I come back from around a corner "Did something happen when I was gone?" I look at Moshi."Huh? Why are you doing this to your new *cough* new*cough* boyfriend?" Moshi: *crushes John harder*I HEAR YOU YIN!!! John: "I hate myself" I looked down and throw my weapons,"Get out of here guards",The guards left Moshi: *Throws John at wall* Yin: "Uh oh." I fall down acting I passed out. Moshi: OW!!!One of the gaurds shot me in the back.I turned back to normal and fell to the ground.*dead* Yep..It's goes on and on, but here |
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