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Post by Yin on Dec 29, 2005 22:35:23 GMT -5
Great story as ever Leo! It's been a while since I been on so I'm a little behind. That Rougeport sounds a lot like the Rougeport in One Piece.
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 29, 2005 22:38:21 GMT -5
...there's a rougeport in one peice? I'm basing mine off the one in PM2. Wow, I should watch that more.
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Post by Yapi on Dec 30, 2005 13:49:09 GMT -5
well yeah, Rogueport, really sounds like Rogueport there!! hah >_< XD
hey, Leo, can my yoshi participate a little more, I mean just a little, she didn't speak or do anithing at all, X.X
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 30, 2005 14:54:48 GMT -5
Sure. Sorry, sometimes it's hard to keep track of all of the charecters at once. But I garnuntee you something with this arc: Every charecter will have their spotlight, maybe even a chapter based off of them... There's also going to be alot more action and all that good stuff!
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Post by yoshi4evr on Dec 30, 2005 22:57:42 GMT -5
What the these are GREAT Leoshi i cant belive i wasnt gonna read these keep them up
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Post by Yoshifighter on Dec 30, 2005 23:00:22 GMT -5
Yeah Im starting to like it more.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Jan 1, 2006 10:31:26 GMT -5
Yay, a Bandit's gonna die! Uh, I mean, why must Moshi be so persistent on that book?!
Nonetheless, another great page!
Not that it's an officially confirmed thing, but I believe that thievery in Rogueport would technically not be a crime, unless you consider it to be and wanna grab tha guy and choke those Coins outta him.
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Post by Leoshi on Jan 2, 2006 20:48:57 GMT -5
Alright, here we are!
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“So… anyone up for sight-seeing?” Yapi asked.
“I’m not too sure.” Leoshi added in. “I have too much to think about right now.”
“Don’t you ever enjoy yourself?” Yoshifrog asked? “Just relax for once.”
“How can I relax?” Leoshi responded. “We are in a completely unfamiliar town, filled with rouges and thugs. Not to mention the enemy is sure to have learned of our location by now. It’s only a mater of time before they come after us again.”
“Yeah, where are we going with this?” Lava asked. “We keep the book, then what? Everyone going to keep trying to get it, and it’s too powerful to destroy. What the point, what are we going to do?”
“I…” Leoshi stopped. He had a good point. “I have a premonition. We are supposed to find the temple where it came from.”
“In a place like this?” Yin asked, pointing out of the window of the café into the streets of Rogueport. Criminals and dangerous people passed on by every second or two.
“This is a pit stop.” Yapi said. “At least, I think. The real temple’s further inland.”
“Right.” John added.
“Hey…” Enrique said. “…how do you know we should go there anyway?”
“He’s got a point.” Yoshee added, Champ nodding in agreement.
Leoshi sighed. “I don’t think I should tell them about that night when the school caught on fire. At least, not yet.” he thought.
He looked back unto the other. “It’s a hunch.”
“We escaped our school and traveled all the way over an ocean on a hunch?” Lava asked.
“It beats doing nothing!” Yoshee added. “Besides, at least this way I’m with Champ again!”
<Then it works out, doesn’t it>? Champ added.
Yin raised an eyebrow. “It talks?”
“Champ’s not an “It!” Champ is a Chao, treat him right!” Yoshee shouted back.
“Yesh, sorry.” Yin said, not expecting that kind of reaction.
“So… what do we do for the next few days?” Yoshifrog asked.
“I dunno.” Yapi said. “I’m still up for sight-seeing.”
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The shocked bandit shouted and flew on the ground. The stunned crowds observed as it fell down, Moshi standing victoriously beside it.
Moshi looked back at the fallen Bandit. “That will teach you. No one messes with me and escapes.”
Her glaring eyes looked back up to the crowds. “…any of you want a piece of me as well?”
The group slowly backed off.
“That’s what I thought.” she looked again at the Bandit. “Pathetic. Don’t you ever come near me.”
With that, she launched into the skies. Her wings took flight, soaring higher and higher into the skies. As she flew over the rooftops, she continued to observe the surroundings. Some houses, the docks… a train and blimp station further west. A parlor, and another building hidden behind the shop.
“What a boring kind of place.” Moshi said. “There’s nothing to see in this boring place.”
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A small boat touched the docks. A single figure jumped from the rowboat, touching the dirty dockside. It was a cloaked figure, concealed in a black robe that covered his entire body.
“I’m here.” he said contently, his voice sounding just like an evil version of Leoshi’s. “My minions and fools failed me for the last time. I shall take matters into my own hands.”
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That’s it for now. More action, coming soon!
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Post by Enrique on Jan 2, 2006 21:10:31 GMT -5
Woot, Champ appears. XD What are we doing over there anyways? Oh well... Great chapter, Leo! Can't wait to see the next part!
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Post by moshi5694 on Jan 3, 2006 7:59:06 GMT -5
A bandit...... stealing from a theif? I don't think so. >=) I'm looking forward to some action! As for Leoshi's clone...... I WILL DESTROY HIM INO TINY BITS FOR GIVING ME SUCH LAME FIGHTS!!!! Did I say that out loud? *puppy dog eyes* =3 That's the town for me. I mean, bandits, theives. I can really take over that place. >=3
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Jan 3, 2006 8:45:24 GMT -5
Ooh, drat. There's an evil clone of Leo.
The suspense! It stabs! Stabs like the cleaver of the butcher who is violent!
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Post by Yapi on Jan 3, 2006 17:23:59 GMT -5
YAY!! another great chapter!!, cna wait for the next one! keep it up Leo!!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jan 3, 2006 19:37:11 GMT -5
HARHAR, nobody calls Champ an "it" in front of me! XD Great job on this chapter! I can't wait to see the next one... and what that evil "Leoshi" does...
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Post by Leoshi on Jan 3, 2006 22:05:12 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliments again! Here's another part:
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The clock struck noon. The rest of the group walked from the Inn (minus Teo, who was still resting) and proceeded into the town streets.
"This place is kind of creepy if you think about it." Yoshee said. "Why would people want to live here?"
"I heard rumors about something called the palace of shadow behind a thousand year old dor underground. Then some other guy went in it... I don't know the details." Enrique explained.
"Intresting... I wonder if there's any corellation between the book and the door." Leoshi said.
"Doubt it." Enrique added in. "The civilzation existed too far apart from each other."
"So, anyway..." John said. "I wonder whatever happen to Moshi?"
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Moshi found herself in flight again. She observed the townsfolk, looking for victums in a way.
"...this town is filled with urchins. No one has any sort of challange or anything..." She thought.
As she continued to fly, she spotted a hidden building. A few others inside where in an arguement.
"Well, well well..." she thought. "This looks promising."
She began to dive downwards towards the building. Moshi lowered herself until she was hovering a a window. She curiosly peeked in.
Inside where 3, well dressed Pintas.
"So, boss? Why are ya so mad?" One of the pintas asked.
There was a blue Pinta, apparently the "Boss" of this group.
"It's a bad situation! Francesscia just demanded I resign my job. That ain't hapening!" the boss shouted.
"Yes, sir, Frankie! So, what do ya want us ta do?" one of the others asked, appearantly a body gaurd.
"Should we go and rough her up?" the other bodygaurd asked.
The boss, named "Frankie" got up from his chair. "NO! ARE YA CRAZY?!"
"Sorry, boss!" they both sad in unison.
"Oh..." Moshi thought as she observed through the window. "This must be the famed Sydicate of Rogueport..."
"Then what do ya want us ta do?" the bodygaurds asked.
"I want you to find her and bring her back, so we can solve this like a husband and wife." Frankie said. After that, there was a little bit of silence.
"THAT MEANS NOW, YOU MORONS!" Frankie shouted.
The gaurdsshouted and ran out the door. Moshi hid behind a corner as the two gaurds rushed on past. Moshi smiled. "Now the coast is clear."
She landed on the ground. She held up ehr claw and turned the doorknob. As it creaked open, she peered in and looked at Frankie.
Frankie gasped. "What the-"
"Not so tough now, are you?" Moshi asked.
Frankie growled. "Do you have any idea who ya messin' with?"
"The big, bad, bule guy." Moshi said. "Please, and do you know who I am?"
"I'm gettin' security. Then y'll be sorry!" Frankie shouted.
"I jut saw them leave, doofus>' Moshi said. "How dumb do you think I am?"
"Then you must of been eavesdropping." Frankie said.
"I heard a thing or two. So, a problem with your wife, eh?" Moshi said, sitting in a chair.
"Get out of here now. You are breaking and entering!" Frankie shouted.
"A hot-head. Great." Moshi said. Frankie looked like he was ready to scream, but Moshi held up a claw.
"Save it. Your moron gaurds will not find you precious wife anytime soon." She said.
"And how do you-"
"She's in west Rogueport, precisley twelve feet northwest of the uderground pipe." Moshi said. "I spotted her as I flew over the town."
"Really now?" Frankie asked, raising an eyebrow.
"Yes, really." Moshi said.
"what will it take for you to be quiet about this?" Frankie asked.
Moshi smiled. "Now we are getting somewhere. What do you have?"
Frankie reached into a dresser. "How about these?"
He held a few small papers in his hands. Moshi peeked over at the sheets. "What this?"
"Tickets for the Blimp to Glitzville." Frankie said.
Moshi raised en eyebrow, then turned her head. "Are you asking me out on a trip? Because I'm not intrested in freaks like you."
"No, you idiot." Frankie sighed. "They are for you and whoever else you want."
Moshi reached behind her and rubber her wings. "I don't need a blimp."
"Then they may be of value to you later." Frankly said. He gave her the tickets.
"Fine, I won't talk about this." She said. She proceeded towards the doorway. "I'll see you later."
"GET OUT!" Frankie shouted. Moshi walked out and slammed the door.
"What a looser." she said.
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Yep. I said I'd center chapters based on a specific charecter once and a while, and Moshi got hers. I'll post a new part soon
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Post by Enrique on Jan 3, 2006 22:14:05 GMT -5
XD Funny chapter, Leo. I like how you made Moshi take on those punks. They acted like a mob or something to me. XD Great job!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jan 3, 2006 22:43:32 GMT -5
Lol, she took on the syndicate. Great job, Leo! I like the way this is coming! ^^
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Jan 4, 2006 8:30:18 GMT -5
Aw c'mon, Frankie! You're Furious Frankie! You took down 100 guys single-handedly at once!
But anyways, very interesting in the link to Paper Mario 2.
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Post by moshi5694 on Jan 4, 2006 15:55:28 GMT -5
Haha, whose the whimp now? And why do we need a blimp. Ohwell, I can sell them for money. And the chances of me winning agenst him 1/1. BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! >> You didn't see anything........
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Jan 4, 2006 16:23:42 GMT -5
I'm starting to doubt my trust to you, Mosh...
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Post by Leoshi on Jan 4, 2006 17:55:16 GMT -5
Well, it seems to be the way to made her charecter act. I'm going to get the next part up soon. And you'll see why we may need the tickets...
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