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Post by firespikez on Oct 16, 2005 11:56:37 GMT -5
this is my paint-spikeshi ^^ (the software of paint) i know the neck is small but, does someone like it? or what do i have to modify?  |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 16, 2005 16:12:46 GMT -5
It's very cute! The neck is a little small, but that's okay. Good job shading too!
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Post by Tempest on Oct 16, 2005 16:21:51 GMT -5
This isn't bad at all for a first attempt! You did very nicely with the shading! Nice job! I think the neck looks fine, because it's kinda like a cartoonishi way for him to stretch his face across the screen. Y'know what I'm saying?  |
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Post by firespikez on Oct 16, 2005 16:24:00 GMT -5
yeah:P kinda cartoon with the shy guy who made a brick XD
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 16, 2005 17:55:26 GMT -5
Try to use the curved line tool as often as possible. It takes practice but it really pays off.  |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 16, 2005 17:57:17 GMT -5
Yeah, Infact that is the ONLY tool I use! Nothing else but the paint bucket!
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Post by firespikez on Oct 16, 2005 17:57:48 GMT -5
ok. thanks!
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Post by Anjil on Oct 16, 2005 19:39:35 GMT -5
Ah, not bad for your very first try!
But when you shade and add highlights and it cuts off the lineart, you can go over the lineart again so that it doesn't look so messy. Yah, you can try using the premade shape tools if you're not so comfortable with the pencil and pen tools just yet. I used the circle tool to make Yoshi's nose when I first started out.
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Post by firespikez on Oct 17, 2005 7:52:53 GMT -5
ok, thanks. but what do you want to say by ''over the lineart"
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Post by red.yoshi on Oct 17, 2005 14:56:56 GMT -5
i believe she means it covers your finished lines - ever hear the expression color in the lines?
it still needs more practice, but you will get the hang of it.
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Post by Yoshi4ever on Oct 18, 2005 7:43:57 GMT -5
Pretty goood for the first try, though the neck is thin and the cubes don't quite stop vanishing correctly (all 3d objects edges either "vanish" to a point or stop and connect with parrarell lines).
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