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Post by Tempest on Dec 4, 2005 12:46:49 GMT -5
Okay.. so back when we did the Y4 RPG, Lazoshi helped out quite a bit and made an uber-cool character named Leonidas, a Greek based character with all sorts of cool weapons - hoplon and xyston as you can see in the picture. Well, I decided to draw him. Too bad I forgot about the sketch until two days ago, and now I'm giving him this super late picture. Sorry! >>; Anyways, I worked about 5-6 hours on this all together, and this is only the 75% size picture, cuz it was sooo huge. If you want the 100%, you can PM me, Lazoshi. Now, without furthur interruptions, I give you.. LEONIDAS THE GOLDEN WARRIOR! Hope you like it! Critique/comments welcome! ;D
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Post by Anjil on Dec 4, 2005 12:59:46 GMT -5
Whoaz! You're improving a lot, methinks. Nice job on his pose and the shading. I really like that sky, too.
I just think that the sunset in the back could've been a bit brighter. It looks sort of dull with just that color orange. I think lighter and brighter oranges, or maybe a lens flare, could've made it more realistic. Also, those little orange lines around him, I'm guessing suggests shiny-ness, sort of bother me. I don't think you should've made them transparent. And maybe you could've used a lighter orange. Still, nice job! Keep it up!
Erm, yeah, crits. Please don't hurt me. XD
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Post by Tempest on Dec 4, 2005 13:13:02 GMT -5
Thanks Anjil! YOU AND YOUR CRITICISM! *throws sack of potatoes at you* But thank you, I value your comments and criticism. And because I think oh-so-highly of your critique, I fixed the picture immediately, and hopefully it looks a little better now.
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 4, 2005 13:22:40 GMT -5
WOW, that's so awesome! Great pic there, you're great at drawing this stuff
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Dec 4, 2005 14:21:43 GMT -5
yay the letter alpha
his tail is too small
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Post by Yoshiken on Dec 4, 2005 16:25:02 GMT -5
man that picture rockS! XD I especially love the eyes and how you made the face! the cape is awesome too! ^_^. Angela is right, you have definitely improved.
the only criticism i have to offer is that i think the feet need a li'l bit more detail.
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Post by red.yoshi on Dec 4, 2005 17:25:12 GMT -5
leonidas' right foot looks a little smaller then his left. great job on the shading and shadowing stuffs!
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Post by Teo on Dec 4, 2005 17:26:34 GMT -5
That is really sweet!!
But more critisism...I know...
The only thing I can say is the head looks a bit small, otherwise, you did great on this.
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Post by Tempest on Dec 4, 2005 17:35:20 GMT -5
Thanks for all the comments yall.
LD - his tail isn't really small, it's perspective and my own style of anthro Yoshies that makes the tail small, I guess.
Yoshiken + Red - yeah, I've always sucked at drawing feet.
Teo - The back of the head? I don't understand? But thanks for the comment.
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Post by anjilfan on Dec 4, 2005 19:20:09 GMT -5
Awsome !*dun dun dundundun!*(when I played Wario Ware Touched the sfx got stuck in my head...)
Anyways........wonderful!
*****
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 5, 2005 11:03:45 GMT -5
What's the symbol on his shield?
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Dec 5, 2005 16:42:39 GMT -5
the alpha simbol
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Post by vaporshi on Dec 6, 2005 18:46:08 GMT -5
I absolutely adore the sky/background and colouring. Soooo pretty *_*
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Post by yoshicreator on Dec 14, 2005 19:11:47 GMT -5
It wouldn't load all the way but from what I saw uber-awesomeness on the color, style and everything! Really good!
~*YC*~
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Post by Tempest on Dec 14, 2005 19:44:19 GMT -5
Thanks - but you gotta wait for it to load. Trust me, it's worth it. At least I hope, lmao.
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