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Post by Samusyoshi on Aug 28, 2004 21:54:38 GMT -5
You may not know me but I'm a Comic making.Comic to Super Mario GTA Bros. to Mario vs. Sonic I would give you all my comic but it would took to long time to do that but here 2 of my comic   P.S I was Supermario9 in my other fourms (Marioportal) |
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Post by Jacobthehero on Aug 28, 2004 21:58:17 GMT -5
YOU ARE SUMPERMARIO9?!
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Post by Samusyoshi on Aug 28, 2004 22:03:38 GMT -5
Ding**Ding*You are correct |
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Post by teh yoshi on Aug 28, 2004 22:09:48 GMT -5
Dude. Cussing like that = not cool. I would not recommend showing stuff like that on boards like these since these forums are aimed for the younger (and I mean younger) crowd.
No cussing with characters such as those, unless it's REALLY, REALLY funny. Other than that, it's still not cool. It just seems so lame and immature, you know? I hope so...
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Post by Samusyoshi on Aug 28, 2004 22:13:53 GMT -5
Dude. Cussing like that = not cool. I would not recommend showing stuff like that on boards like these since these forums are aimed for the younger (and I mean younger) crowd. No cussing with characters such as those, unless it's REALLY, REALLY funny. Other than that, it's still not cool. It just seems so lame and immature, you know? I hope so... Man I see well ummm*Run like .....*(You know what it is) |
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Post by teh yoshi on Aug 28, 2004 22:15:48 GMT -5
Don't worry. You can say hell, ass, dammit, bastard, and whatnot here. However, do not abuse the privilege to use those words. Or else it'll just make you look retarded  . |
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Post by Samusyoshi on Aug 28, 2004 22:27:18 GMT -5
Don't worry. You can say hell, ass, dammit, bastard, and whatnot here. However, do not abuse the privilege to use those words. Or else it'll just make you look retarded . oh i see *honk his nose*honk honk hehe |
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Post by sakura on Aug 29, 2004 8:47:54 GMT -5
i didn't understand that at all  |
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Post by Jacobthehero on Aug 29, 2004 10:22:05 GMT -5
all i only says "crap" that all
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Post by Yoshi9 on Aug 29, 2004 13:14:31 GMT -5
i didn't understand that at all either did I |
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Post by sakura on Aug 29, 2004 14:24:13 GMT -5
what is the order of the boxes? doesn't make sense. I haven't been this confused in a long time  , and all the swearing wasn't very funny... |
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Post by sheboo on Aug 29, 2004 14:50:32 GMT -5
no offence or anything--but they don't really make much sense, and you went a little heavy on the swears there |
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Darkmark
Junior Yoshi
It's Darkmark! Darkmark! The M is not capitalised! *Brick*
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Post by Darkmark on Aug 29, 2004 15:35:08 GMT -5
Gee, and -I- felt bad for censored swearing and 'mature' jokes in DMBN... Okay, I'll level with you. These aren't very good. The text is hard to read, the swearing is senseless, and you've got all the horrid no-no's; badly done MS Paint effects, badly organised framework, bittage mixes, no text boxes, and humor... what humor? Swearing is not a joke. Blood is not funny. My advice: Start again from scratch. Or, for more advice on what NOT to do, try "How not to run a comic", located here: hownottorunacomic.keenspace.com/. |
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Post by Moot on Aug 29, 2004 17:07:56 GMT -5
Hmm... not sure where to start.. might help if you laid out panels in a decent fashion in the second strip... that coupled with the cramped frame, means you can't really tell whats going on :\ Also... text boxes tend to look better for these sort of sprite comics... and action lines tend to help too, so reverything doesn't just look like its been thrown into MSPaint and left. I'd like to think I know what I'm talking about, I briefly made a sprite comic myself, a few months back I should start it again... If anyone actually wants to see it, PM me or something and I'll send a link. |
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New Yoshi
Chiptune Raccoon
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Post by Graedius on Aug 29, 2004 20:20:18 GMT -5
 I don't mind gore nor language if it's used correctly... which this wasn't. Hahah. Pure criticism aside, I really like that bowser sprite... from a game I never played, it seems. |
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Post by teh yoshi on Aug 29, 2004 20:21:36 GMT -5
Ah, yes. I did notice a big difference with the Bowser sprite? Where did you get it? I think it looks really cool, albeit poorly used.
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Post by Mortal on Aug 29, 2004 20:22:09 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]It is two Bowser sprites mixed up. But I recall seeing the head somewhere...[/glow]
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Post by Yoshata on Aug 29, 2004 21:34:54 GMT -5
Those comics are both pretty lousy. I'm really sorry, but you shouldn't have put comics with blood and cussing in them here at the FAMILY-FRIENDLY Yoshi's Corner. Also, agreeing to what Darkmark said, they're really hard to follow.
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Post by Digi on Aug 29, 2004 21:51:48 GMT -5
i think those bowser sprites are a sprited version of SSBM characters i've seen some of Link, Luigi,and Mario.
and yes those comics are pretty hard to follow sorrys
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Post by Moot on Aug 30, 2004 4:45:12 GMT -5
Yeah, its a custom made Bowser sprite. The same auther also made custom Samus and Yoshi sprites too, I recall.
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<-- Way cooler sig than Sakura's
