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Post by Lord of the Dance on Apr 17, 2006 12:18:04 GMT -5
Haha, this is part 2 of 5 for my Paint "project". I know the Yoshi's a little tilted... >_>  Critique, please. Beat my ego down! XD |
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Post by Enrique on Apr 17, 2006 13:16:58 GMT -5
Not bad, though, personally, I think the shading could be worked on. The mountains (I think) in the background are way too undetailed in my opinion as well. On a positive note, the proportion of the body of the Yoshi is quite good. MSPaint is extremely difficult to get "extremely amazing" pictures with, but, with practice, you'll get there.
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Post by Anjil on Apr 17, 2006 17:41:09 GMT -5
Ooh, very nice for MSPaint, mmhmm. Although, the Yoshi's pink shading doesn't exactly match with neither the Yoshi's actual color nor its surroundings. And the clouds look a bit more like puffs of smoke and fog than anything (unless that's what they're supposed to be XD;). The speckle tool really isn't the best for making clouds, unless you're pro at it or something. And yeah, I believe the mountains and ground could be a little more detailed.
Hey, you asked for critiques. XD; It's a really cute picture, though. You're pretty good at handling the painful simplicity that is MSPaint. Keep it up!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Apr 17, 2006 17:43:44 GMT -5
Oops. Thanks, guys (well, and gal XD). I'll try harder with the next part, rest assured. ^^ Thanks for the tips, Anjil.
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Post by Teo on Apr 17, 2006 21:43:10 GMT -5
Oooo... the yoshi looks all goey, I think there's worse than your mouse XD
The egg-like eyes are a nice touch, a lot more alive then regular eyes anyone else might draw with the little shine and all... MS is a hard program to paint in, and you did a good job. I have nothing else to say that hasn't been said to beat down your ego, nor congratulate you any more... SO CONGRATULATIONS!!
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