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Post by plebenshiren on Jul 12, 2006 1:48:59 GMT -5
my comic that i'm starting called Daize comics featuring my characters, hyper lad, honky tonk yoshi ect. they don't follow on after the other, they're just there to generat smiles   posted it in hte wrong form first then realised there were a few things wrong with it so i fixed those up best i could hope you like it |
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Post by teh yoshi on Jul 12, 2006 2:36:45 GMT -5
Posted from the other thread:
Hehe, nice! I really like the facial expressions. They're cute. :3 I think those were really well done. The Yoshi's left arm looks inconsistent in some places, though. It's too low and placed right above his left leg. You should move it on up his "neck" a bit more.
A pet peeve of mine, but you should capitalize your I's when making comics.
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Post by roshie on Jul 12, 2006 5:08:15 GMT -5
Whoa, that so cool, i like the way he tryed to be better.
He totally hurt hes leg, i liked hes face then (0)~O
Great variety of humor, make us some moer ;D
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Post by Yoshifrog on Jul 12, 2006 12:35:08 GMT -5
That's really cute. The shading is fantastic, and you have the yoshi's form down splendidly. What really amazes me is you went without copying the body over, because you can tell you redrew it each time. That takes effort 0.o. Though for some reason it seriosly bothers me when they make yoshi talk by saying yoshi. Also when they make him cheer, they say Yoshiiiiiii! instead of what he truly says, which is Yahoo. Lol, of course that doesn't affect the art, which is fantastic.
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Post by plebenshiren on Jul 12, 2006 13:21:23 GMT -5
wow thanks for all the positive comments!  i tried to fix up the arm problem and yeh it took it me a long time to draw it cos i didn't copy and paste the pic each time. and in my comics he only does the "yoshi yoshi" thing when there's non-yoshis in the room. there's another one on the way soon dun dun duuuuhhh!!!! |
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Post by Fifth on Jul 12, 2006 14:01:07 GMT -5
Ooh, a comic!
Kudos to you for not copy-pasting the one Yoshi over and over! I do so admire such integrity when it comes to comics.
I'll agree with teh here, in that the expressions are really well-done, and that the Yoshi's left arm is pretty weird.
Cute, though!
You don't see many people making non-sprite comics.
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Post by Graedius on Jul 13, 2006 9:05:14 GMT -5
You win for facial expressions and brown Yoshi usage. Double-scoop ice cream
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Post by plebenshiren on Jul 13, 2006 11:08:12 GMT -5
yay!! thank you ^^, i take it you like brown yoshis |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 13, 2006 17:21:00 GMT -5
Honky-tonk's feet seem a little too small, and you left little white dots that kind of interfere with the coloring.
Yeah, your shading is right on. I love it. And, you didn't copy and paste any of the characters. Great job!
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Post by plebenshiren on Jul 14, 2006 1:02:11 GMT -5
thank you the white dots? oh-yeh, this was ariginally a drawing in my sketch book and when i fill in parts with the fill color in paint it leaves all these dots along ther outlines. i tried to fix it up as best i could, but then it became more of a chore so i left it ^^; |
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