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Post by anjilfan on Jul 12, 2006 14:36:42 GMT -5
Okay...this is my VERY FIRST sprite COMIC!Don't laugh...please... Here... |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 12, 2006 18:13:47 GMT -5
It's cute, haha. I like the Chain Chomps.
Next time you make a comic, you should put in some sort of background. Just a suggestion.
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Post by Twi on Jul 12, 2006 18:17:47 GMT -5
For a first sprite comic, it's pretty cool. Like Yoshee said, a background would be nice otherwise you're just in a floating void of nothingness.
Good job regardless =D
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Post by anjilfan on Jul 12, 2006 19:23:37 GMT -5
Yeah, I know...except I can't put a background...
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Post by Melon Yoshi on Jul 12, 2006 19:35:20 GMT -5
LOL... Very cute Ra^^
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Post by anjilfan on Jul 13, 2006 9:00:30 GMT -5
Next oneClick to view next page. I'll try to put a background in the next one.
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Post by plebenshiren on Jul 13, 2006 11:20:02 GMT -5
lmao i like the second one
i especially liked the fire and the fact it didn't even faze the chomp ;D
crap! (whoosh!) lol
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Post by anjilfan on Jul 13, 2006 11:23:06 GMT -5
XD Yeah,I liked that too. My third is almost done.Thanks! Did you read the second half? Edit: Aaaaaaaaannnd DONE!!! Here ya go!You can't really see the words, so read the description. |
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Post by plebenshiren on Jul 13, 2006 13:05:36 GMT -5
lol
how come the preview pic is different from the actual deviation?
i read both of em anyways and both are very good!
i look forward to seeing more of your sprite comics:)
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Post by anjilfan on Jul 13, 2006 16:40:46 GMT -5
Because, I don't really want to make two seperate ones..unless the first one is too small...XD
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 13, 2006 17:15:14 GMT -5
Haha, fiery action rocks.
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Post by anjilfan on Jul 13, 2006 19:36:53 GMT -5
Okay!Here it is! BattleI didn't put another one with it, so if you click, you can read it. |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 13, 2006 22:42:42 GMT -5
Nice, it's good and long. I like that.
Haha, Bowser's too evil.
The second-to-last panel is a bit confusing for a few seconds with all the dialogue.
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Post by anjilfan on Jul 14, 2006 0:56:00 GMT -5
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