Resident Evil 4 Collab

[Twi]

www.deviantart.com/deviation/37358458/

Yes, although the name may not sound like it, this IS yoshi art.

This is the partially done lineart for a collab with Yesha, I'm doing the lineart she is colouring. This is just half of it, the part I've done, taken me 2 hours collectively. Yesha as Ada Wong with a shotgun. Just looking for some critique so I can improve for the finished thing, I may redo it by tracing or something, but currently this is what it will look like. So critique is very welcome, especially for help on the feet, cos they really need working on. Yes it is smudgy, you can ignore that unless you find it's really bad.

Just need help before I continue with the rest, drawing Twi as Leon.

[contention]

Woah there Twi Guy, this is actually very much a great "line-art" drawing that you have created in the name of Resident Evil Four. Especially since you have gone and used the body and the anatomy of one of the characters; turning it into a Yoshi like outlook, giving it a new face to work out of. It's interesting, and you did a very great job on altering the two but keeping the fashion-line between both worlds. Ada was a peculiar character in the game, and you did a nice job of catching that serious-like emotion on the glance of her face. The eyes and the mouth are working relatively together to create that "monotone yet strict" look; sort of smug and ready in the matter of things. You've definetly got that right on the marker with your skills there buddy, and fits better than ever. The body is defiently a high point in your outline due to it's diffrence from everything else; the way it stands in an altered point of view from the other parts. It's slim and very dainty, something that could be seen on Ada. Due to this, you were able to capture her character and successfully manage to put Yesha's own name in the place. For a Collab, you have definetly aced your section. With color this is going to have much about it, for you did a very great job at getting down the lines and making them fit in with the rest of the scenario. Some say it can be hard to get down good line art, but you definetly proved them wrong Twi Guy.

As for the shoes that you were mentioning, don't worry there; there isn't anything off about them. Drawing feet are always akward, from so many diffrent angles. Just do what you can, try not to put to much focus on them. Easily slide them with the rest of the picture, that way even if you feel, "They aren't good enough" they won't draw attention away from the rest of the picture. However, in full; the shoes have nothing wrong with them buddy. The whole aspect really helps fit in and create a final image. They give off that "High-Heel" type of feel that Ada would likely go along with. As for the gun in her hands, most superb job at really showing that there. There is also something about that, which you really gave insight to as you drew this character. The way you do your anatomy is amazing, because the turn of the body is seen in ways through things. It shows that Ada's body is not straight, but angled and curved. You were able to really show a side to that, and get across the meaning you were looking for. As well, the way you had her "grasp" the gun is perfect, the hands really look like they are holding and touching at something. Many artists can never get the curve of hands or legs right, but you were able to process such. For a Collab you really went all out, Yesha must definetly enjoy getting to spend some of her time coloring this in for you. The best of luck to you on your continued creations, keep up the awesome work there Twi Guy and never give in.

By the way, don't fret over any smudges; on line-art it's inevitable nearly to not have any. They don't take away anything from the picture, so don't let yourself feel that way. Everything is still in clear-view and there is not a spot wrong that can be soared through. It shows you spent your time to make this look good, and you came out with something great. Seeing Twi as Leon would be intriguing; never knew you were in Raccoon City, my my, you've been through Hell. Seriously though, this is a great idea and you were really great at capturing the side of Ada Wong that is expressed throughout the whole image of the game. Always continue to go on with your ideas and expressions, and remember that there is much in you to work with. You have the line-art precision down, especially with your emotions and anatomy. Don't worry on things Twi, because what you draw, is always really excellent from the emotion to every single tip.

[Lord of the Dance]

I like her expression and the anthro-ness of it. The dress looks nice, and the gun is fairly accurate.

One of her arms is thicker than the other, though, and her shoes look somewhat out-of-place... maybe making them look more like heels than slippers?

[Teo]

The first thing I thought when I looked at this picture was, "Crap! I don't want to get in her way!" At least that's the first impression.

Looking closely, it looks like you put time and effort into this, and you edited it a lot to look just how you wanted. A great work in my opinion!