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Post by firespikez on Aug 3, 2006 7:44:24 GMT -5
i modified the wing at paint...cuz i couldn't see it. i really missed the grass >.<
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 3, 2006 12:25:36 GMT -5
Modifying the wing in Paint made it stand out too much... maybe going back over it in pencil would work better? He would also look more like he was sitting on the grass if you colored it up to his body, and a little bit around him. The sky isn't filled in all the way, either...
I like the way Spike came out, though. He looks proportional, despite the slightly thin body. It looks good to me. I also like how thick your coloring is in everything else. It looks more realistic like that.
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Post by Teo on Aug 3, 2006 15:06:30 GMT -5
Yeah, is that a night sky or a day time sky? *bricked* Yes, Yoshee had the best idea, going over it in pencil... because MS pain is EVIL... But as for what I think, I like most of all his head. It just seems... how do you say it? Lacking better words, it looks really well drawn. It looks nice and solid, and detailed. Your shading talents are great, and on that note, you did a great shading job. Yes, the body is a tad skinny, and I don't know whether that arm's missing a hand or not XD As something for next time though, I would recommend making the body a good deal chubbier, especially around the chest and stomach, maybe changing the wing position and making them larger, and uh... giving poor Spikey some fingers
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Post by firespikez on Aug 3, 2006 16:48:26 GMT -5
im not good to do backgrounds ,I didnt had anymore of this color anyway. ...thats why its just like...sort of zig-zag.. oh and its night sky. I would do grass on him but...Im not able XO
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