Boshis bird Bonanza

[Chaos]

"i"iwi ^

da love nest ^

hatchling^

PLEASE! PLEASE critique me! be honest on whats wrong and say what needs doing! i need to improve . and of course my #1 thing... please do not suck up.... please.....
Constructive critisim is welcome at my house

[Dragon]

............................The only thing I can find wrong is that the beak in the first one looks a little too long. Other than that though, they're phenominal. I like them, it'd be interesting to see them in color. I'd offer but my printer's broken. Nice job, oh, and try drawing backgrounds, a forest or a cottage house would look pretty nice with the birds in front, hope that helps, you're a really good artist Boshi!

[Chaos]

oh i forgot to mention that first birds beak is like that. its an "i"iwi from hawii.. porr thing is almost extinct.

and i made them that way, black and white. its not because of my scanner only does black and white but it how i drew them. i have a thing for black and white pictures im horrible with colors

[Kasen]

Bosh you draw birds so adorable. I like the baby one a lot. ^_^ to tell the truth im not a big bird fan though b/c gasp you know the bird that messed it all up for other birds. they are evil. He He remember the kiwi though
(grabs beak) lol oh yea great shading also man im so jealous-_- gasp

[moshi5694]

8-)I lovd the first one the best. ;DThe ohers were very good too.

[red.yoshi]

wow! awsome boshi! your birds are awsome! i cant draw bird feet for my life, lol. great job! no critisim, none at all!

[Aniki]

oh boy! this draws are great! I (seriously) can't find anything wrong there... congratz!

[CherryBlossom]

Ohhhh your birds are so adorable .... the second one is my favorite.. the only thing that these drawings need are some mor darker values... but other than that they are really good Keep up the good work