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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Jun 11, 2005 21:15:47 GMT -5
I made a totally different version of the first picture. I hope you like it. NOTE: That is not my real name.  |
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Post by sakura on Jun 12, 2005 9:42:19 GMT -5
eep! okay fist pointer... when you draw sowords use a ruler to make sure its stays sraight otherwise cool design
which way is the body faceing?
I really like the design of your clothing but to make it more real it needs to move with and around the body and there needs to be wrinkles... just look at your own clothes for inspiration
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Jun 12, 2005 11:13:43 GMT -5
...Whoops. Thanks for more advice. More studying for me. I didn't have a ruler but I'll buy one. As for body position. He's facing foward but his head is off to the side so I say he looking in another direction. As for the wrinkles, haven't got that far in the book. Well As long as you like it, I'm happy.
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Post by red.yoshi on Jun 12, 2005 12:09:04 GMT -5
i think the eye is a little too big, and same comments as sakura. cool pic though.
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Jun 12, 2005 16:28:18 GMT -5
That's sort of a good thing. I read in my Manga Book about the eyes. It said large eyes make him seem cooler or her cuter. Can I ask something? I ain't mad or nothing, but can use stop criticizing me? I hate that little. If I keep getting criticized about my Drawings, I sometimes go on a drawing spree trying to get it right. I'm not in the mood to draw so lucky me. Thanks for the advice too. I'll catch up on my drawings soon.
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Midnight
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Post by Midnight on Jun 12, 2005 16:35:54 GMT -5
I know what you mean.I,for one,hate critiscism.I'm not the best artist either,but I like your picture.I don't waste time with wrinkles on clothes and all that junk.
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Post by Moot on Jun 12, 2005 18:01:47 GMT -5
if anything, criticism can help you improve your drawings  |
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Post by sakura on Jun 12, 2005 19:09:14 GMT -5
i lovew critique-ment... but noone ever gives me any they all just insult it *le sigh* but yeah i have a drawing book but mainly through critique and your own style do you actually make it your own... yes and positive critique is your friend!
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