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Post by sakura on Jul 13, 2005 18:57:39 GMT -5
www.deviantart.com/deviation/20537981/its my friends lineart but i colored it for him... i need to know what you think of the coloring please critique... i really don't want just great job comments I DIDN'T DRAW THIS, I ONLY COLORED IT!!!!!
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Post by red.yoshi on Jul 13, 2005 20:24:33 GMT -5
its pretty good, ok now for the critique.
try shading. it would up the picture value alot. (im talking about blending, just just gleams in the hair and eyes.)
other then that, its great!
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Post by sakura on Jul 13, 2005 20:27:10 GMT -5
no it does.. its just very light ^^;
thats why its try number one
i have to go back in and re-shade it
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Post by Enrique on Jul 13, 2005 20:27:51 GMT -5
It's pretty good!
Critique: Shading needs to be more noticeable, especially if you want to deal with shadows.
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Post by red.yoshi on Jul 13, 2005 20:28:40 GMT -5
sorry, i didnt see it ^,^;;
new critique: make the shading darker X D.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 13, 2005 23:12:38 GMT -5
Yes, more shading would work better. And, the hand that's carrying the flower looks kind of odd. The tree also looks funny. It is pretty good, if you weren't pointing out mistakes ;D
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Post by Kasen on Jul 14, 2005 11:51:02 GMT -5
It only looks like she has 3 fingers and the thumb...but the rose could be blocking it..I aslo agree that there could be some shading on the dress, the shading on the hair is goo though also I think you over exagerrated on the grass its a littlle long, unless you meant it to be that way, and it looks like the the wind is blowing so maybe have the grass be blown to the left also like the dress and hair...and thats it XD other then that Its great
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Post by Yoshi Vert on Jul 15, 2005 4:20:18 GMT -5
It's a nice job, Sakura ! Now for the critics (please don't be affraid ! lol) ...
The main default is a problem of proportion. There is a problem with the way the hair are implanted in the head of your character, but it's not very important. Your hands aren't well drawned (remember the hands are the most difficult body part to draw ! It's maybe another reason why the second hand is behind the girl ?). Many hesitance in the way you coloured and drawned your character, you should take a little more time and zoom in your picture when you color it. There is a problem with the wind effects that you tried to make for the dress. Because it seems that there is not so much wind, just a little little breeze (just look at her hair). You should also work more on shading effects. Well, I think it's enough for the critics.
But, as I said in the first line, it's a very good job, because drawing and colouring by computer isn't easy ! Keep on improving ! ;D
Yoshi Vert
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Post by sakura on Jul 16, 2005 15:47:58 GMT -5
I DIDN'T DRAW THIS I JUST COLORED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 17, 2005 0:31:30 GMT -5
^^;; then I guess your friend needs critiquing, too  *bricked* |
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Post by Aniki on Jul 17, 2005 15:39:24 GMT -5
you two did a great job! better? |
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Post by Yoshi Vert on Jul 18, 2005 5:00:10 GMT -5
Ouch, I need to wear glasses lol, sorry !! About the coloring ? Humm, nothing much to critique instead of the lack of shading effects !
Yoshi Vert
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Post by Kasen on Jul 18, 2005 16:06:40 GMT -5
sorry about that sakura...man I need to read the descriptions I usually just go to the drawngs sorry..again...*cowers*
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