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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Sept 3, 2005 18:50:33 GMT -5
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Post by Yoshifrog on Sept 3, 2005 19:41:32 GMT -5
It looks good! I give it a 9/10. There is something odd about it I can't seem to put my finger on... all in all great job!
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Post by Enrique on Sept 3, 2005 20:13:13 GMT -5
10/10 I like it, Jay! I don't see a whole lot that needs improving!
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Post by Kasen on Sept 3, 2005 21:11:01 GMT -5
I voted 8, b/c its to gray, and the white jacket should have some shading in it, its allwhite, all I say is add some shading, and it would look mega awesome..XD
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Sept 3, 2005 21:57:45 GMT -5
The really thin lines don't mix well with the big ones. And the lines are wiggly in some places.
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Post by Satoshi on Sept 3, 2005 23:29:08 GMT -5
6/10, the lines could use cleaning up, and more shading.
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Sept 3, 2005 23:35:09 GMT -5
I can fix that on my next pic. This is just a small sketch to see what I need done. Thanks everyone.
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