Graystripe-Ravenpaw-Fireheart

[Yoshifrog]

www.deviantart.com/deviation/46258913/
I KNOW YOU ALL HATE LINKS.
I'm sooo lazy today. Excuse me ]:

Read the description there please~

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LAZINESS GONE~~



MURRRR I LOVE YOU ERIN HUNTER *cuddles books*
I've read each book at least twice. Read them all last summer (or the one before, can't remember) Sorrry if I gave away something with their names people who haven't read all the books yet.

For those who haven't, read the "Warriors" series- it's the only book series I've read fully (except little house on the prarie. But that was for school D:)

She also wrote them beautifly (pffft skillz, I spelled beautifully wrong. SO LAZY I HAVEN'T DONE MY HOMEWORK D:). It improves you're writing skillz ^^


*PICTURE*
Reall quick, crappy thing. But those 3 are the cutest little trio. I LOVE YOU 3 *snuggles forever*

[Sirghe]

SQUEEEE!!!!~ Kittens! :3

[Moot]

Reall quick, crappy thing.

If you think its crappy, I don't get why you wouldn't spend more on it so that you'd think it wasn't crappy? Anyways, onto the meat of the comment:

This might just be me, but the two characters on the left pretty much similar, even down to the pose. Theres not really a whole lot differentiating them apart from colours from what I can see. Also The eyes of the middle character his head seems to be facing forwards but due to the shape of the eyes it makes it look like he's actually staring off to the right, as the perspective there would be more fitting if his head were turned slightly to the right.

Shading in some places seems a little overdone, like the leg of the second character, but in other areas like the sides of the first and third characters faces, theres treally not as much shading there as I'd expect there to be, so in this instance it makes the image overall look a little flat.

I think the thing that gets to me most though is that in some places theres colouring outside of the lines, and what looks to be yellow streaks around the edges, whereas elsewhere theres actually a lack of colour inside the lines.

...But yeah even though it looks like I've ripped this to shreds its by no means a bad image, I just feel that it could do with a little more work on it.