1st Time with Pen Tool: Jay Tanoshi

[Wildfire the Dragon]

Hard to believe, but this is my first time using the Pen Tool in Photoshop 7...odd ya? I have to admit, I really screwed up the muscles...D: And posing is not really my thing...so yeah...hard to believe. I screwed up here and there, but meh...I'm going to try and finish this when I have the chance. However, I dunno when though, so...you know. I'm going to try and finish it by the end of the week hopefully.

Original Sketch

Line Art

I have to admit (uses your paragraph-starter), this is awesome Jay! I love the way you use the pen tool. I wanna see this thing colored! ^^


I only have two bits of criticism:

I noticed that you can see the leg lines through the clothes. Don't know if you want it that way or not, but I just thought I'd point it out.

Second thing is his chest (as you said XD). If you look in the middle, there's a big empty space. Next time, make a cross in the middle (ab muscles are connected) and that should make things look better. ^^


Lemme tell you Jay, you have REALLY improved! I like how you made it into computer graphics, keep it up! I wanna see more from you soon. :3

(if you are offended by my criticisms, just ignore me)

[Wildfire the Dragon]

hero said:

I have to admit (uses your paragraph-starter), this is awesome Jay! I love the way you use the pen tool. I wanna see this thing colored! ^^


I only have two bits of criticism:

I noticed that you can see the leg lines through the clothes. Don't know if you want it that way or not, but I just thought I'd point it out.

Second thing is his chest (as you said XD). If you look in the middle, there's a big empty space. Next time, make a cross in the middle (ab muscles are connected) and that should make things look better. ^^


Lemme tell you Jay, you have REALLY improved! I like how you made it into computer graphics, keep it up! I wanna see more from you soon. :3

(if you are offended by my criticisms, just ignore me)

Oh, thanks Hero. Yeah, truth is, I get that thing about the legs, so many people mistake it for legs, but actually, it's the seams of the jeans, you know, the parts on the side, it's pretty easy to mistake that, but yeah, I understand.

Thanks for the tip about the chest, I'll try to fix that when I have the chance.

Again, thanks a ton Hero. ^^