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Post by Yoshi4ever on Jun 18, 2004 20:57:41 GMT -5
Yoshi was getting a little mad. Bowser was up to no good going about Yoshi island and trampling the forests. He hoped on to a cloud and flew to Mushroom kingdoom to get help.
Mario was sleeping on the couch when a loud knock on the door woke him up. He climbed out of the couch and opened the door, "Yoshi do you have any Idea what time it is?" He pointed at a clock that read 5:27 AM. " Oh sorry mario, didn't realize there was that much time difference from Yoshi island to here, but bowser is about and.."
Bowser was grinning yoshi had left...probaubly went to get help from Mario...perfect...he was now under full control of yoshi's Island and was in the middle of building a brandnew castle. All he had to do was wait for Yoshi to fall into the trap...and even better mario might fall for it too. Then both Yoshi's Island and mushroom kingdoom would be under his control.
Mario got dressed in a flash and was out the door following yoshi. "What the heck is bowser thinking?" he asked himself. They came to a large cloud and hoped on. A few minutes later they landed on Yoshi's island. Yoshi was devastated it looked horable. A large castle lomed over thousands of tree stumps. Nearly a fith of Yoshi's Island was ruined and more of it was going right then. Bowsers Entire army was scuttling about...but strangly there wasn't 1 foe any were near the door. "That's strange Bowser always has guards at the door to his castle..."
To be continued....
So how do you like it, it may have a few spelling errors though.
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Post by Digi on Jul 1, 2004 19:39:36 GMT -5
me likeeee......
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Post by joshi on Jul 1, 2004 20:21:41 GMT -5
Nice work, I hope you can imporve to a high level of writing.
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Post by Yoshi4ever on Jul 2, 2004 9:00:21 GMT -5
yeah, I'm not the best at fan fics of Yoshi but it's all right.
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