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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Oct 3, 2004 19:51:51 GMT -5
kingdom of dreams by light dragoon yoshi intro: --------------------- king:hello,i am the king of dreams,i want to tell you of a tale of 5 yoshis with the technoligy to enter dreams who has destroyed the dream eaters. this is their story.
In the village outskirts,teo and toshi are sittin' under a fruit tree.
Teo:ah,they were right when they said breakfast was the most importaint meal of the day.
Toshi:you got that right.
*ground shakes*
both:what the?!
*all of a sudden a blast of wind hit the boys*
Toshi:we got to tell the others.
Teo:your right this can't be good.
*in the park*
Yoshiken:are you sure you felt something.
aqua yoshi:yeah it could have just been a breeze.
Teo:no,we realy felt something strange.
dragoon:was there an earthquake before the wind.
Teo:yeah.
*ground shakes,but a monster apperes instead.
Toshi:what is that?!
mystrious man:it's called a dream eater.
Yoshiken;A what...?
mystriuos man:a dream eater now go my beast infect thier dreams.
*dream eater disappers, nightfall* *aqua yoshis' dream*
dream eater:infection is sweet mwahaaaaa
to be continued.........
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Post by Yoshiken on Oct 4, 2004 0:25:38 GMT -5
GASP WHAT WILL BECOME OF OUR HEROES...INCLUDING MYSELF...the anxiety is killing me....awesome intro, looks to be a very promising story
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Post by Fifth on Oct 4, 2004 0:29:00 GMT -5
Interesting... reminds me of Alundra. *akward silence* Ah, nevermind.
Anyway, it's got potential. Just make sure you make it nice and surreal. 'Cause surrealism goes hand-in-hand with dreams.;D
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Post by Toshi on Oct 4, 2004 15:06:55 GMT -5
Oh i like it! Can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Oct 11, 2004 17:39:38 GMT -5
i'm sorry but untill the yoshikenitis war ends i will not continue the story,but i will give you a sneak peak on part 2
[glow=black,2,300]SNEAK PEAK[/glow]: aqua yoshi is possesed by the dream eater, and can the gang stop their friend from oblterating the world,then yoshiken gets infected and yoshikenitis is born.
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Post by Yoshiken on Oct 11, 2004 21:36:31 GMT -5
well then you better start that fan fic fast....because the rebels will be destroyed very soon.
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Oct 11, 2004 22:20:26 GMT -5
shut it you moron, half of your army is on our side.
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Post by Teo on Oct 20, 2004 1:07:19 GMT -5
Man... My first time in someone else's fan fic... WHY DIDN'T I READ THIS EARLIER?? I'll end the yoshikenitis war with a tie if I have to! Of course, no violence accepted.
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