Post by Electric yoshi on Jan 23, 2005 12:53:13 GMT -5
okok...the tital is missleading untill the 2nd part... anyway...this fic starts on yoshie's island, with electric being really young...not a baby, but not a teen yoshi yet...like a 6 or 7 year old... any way... heres the 1st part...hope u like it...
NOTE: anything italic is what shes thinking...
"aww!!! not again!" i said to my self, looking at the newly shocked-to-bits apple i was about to eat. "if i keep doing this...ill starve!" i chucked what was left of the apple as hard as i could. why do i keep doing this? i thought. i let out long sigh, sat down in my nest, and rested my head on my hands. why cant i contol my powers? why? ugh...all i can do is shock-a-phy anything i get close to... i thought, as i accedentaly zapped a near by something or other that got too close. im not a safe thing here on yoshie's island... what if i hurt another yoshi? i cant take that chance! i haev to be able to control my powers! i stood up. Ive made up my mind! im leaving! and im not coming back untill i can contol my electricty! with that, i grabbed my map of yoshie's island, and started on my way.
(later that day)
hmmm...ok, i thought as i was looking at the map. by now, i was wandering somewhere deep in the forest. to get to the shore line, i gotta take a right at this....chair? now i was really confused. well, thats what i get for drawing a map in crayon...what the heck is that soposed to be? ugh!!! its no use! i crumpled the map in to a ball, and threw it (which was zapped as soon as it left my hands and was destroyed) now i know im lost! i looked up into the tree tops. I couldnt even see any sunlight, it was so thick! i sighed and continued walking. how am i ever gonna get out of here? now the sun is setting, and the forest is getting even darker than it was before...now i gotta find shelter before something else finds me....but i was too late.
just then a loud growl came from a near by bush. oh no!!! just as i was about to run, the something ran first...tward me! i really didnt get too see it, it was too dark...all i could tell is it was huge! about 7 or 8 times my own size! "AAAHIIEEE!!!" i screeched, ducked down and covered my eyes... expecting the worst...
NOTE: anything italic is what shes thinking...
"aww!!! not again!" i said to my self, looking at the newly shocked-to-bits apple i was about to eat. "if i keep doing this...ill starve!" i chucked what was left of the apple as hard as i could. why do i keep doing this? i thought. i let out long sigh, sat down in my nest, and rested my head on my hands. why cant i contol my powers? why? ugh...all i can do is shock-a-phy anything i get close to... i thought, as i accedentaly zapped a near by something or other that got too close. im not a safe thing here on yoshie's island... what if i hurt another yoshi? i cant take that chance! i haev to be able to control my powers! i stood up. Ive made up my mind! im leaving! and im not coming back untill i can contol my electricty! with that, i grabbed my map of yoshie's island, and started on my way.
(later that day)
hmmm...ok, i thought as i was looking at the map. by now, i was wandering somewhere deep in the forest. to get to the shore line, i gotta take a right at this....chair? now i was really confused. well, thats what i get for drawing a map in crayon...what the heck is that soposed to be? ugh!!! its no use! i crumpled the map in to a ball, and threw it (which was zapped as soon as it left my hands and was destroyed) now i know im lost! i looked up into the tree tops. I couldnt even see any sunlight, it was so thick! i sighed and continued walking. how am i ever gonna get out of here? now the sun is setting, and the forest is getting even darker than it was before...now i gotta find shelter before something else finds me....but i was too late.
just then a loud growl came from a near by bush. oh no!!! just as i was about to run, the something ran first...tward me! i really didnt get too see it, it was too dark...all i could tell is it was huge! about 7 or 8 times my own size! "AAAHIIEEE!!!" i screeched, ducked down and covered my eyes... expecting the worst...
