1st jacob yoshi story out of 3

[maishi]

One day Jacobyoshi was on a quest to save his friend nathshi. But nathshi was at the and of a death maze so Jacob yoshi went to joshi and asked to u have any gear i could borrow i need to save nathshi; sure i will come help u i got safty boots and my shapest swords and also a map of the whole maze so lets go.Ahh jacob we got a proble only one person can go in the maze at a time so ur going to have to go alone WHAT? Fine here i go gasp its a gang of blue evil yoshis DIe then jacob yoshi fell in a trap and had to start from the beganing how does this damn map work i guess i will call joshi with my phone {yo joshi how does this map work just follow the compose jacob i belive in u u can save nath.Ok then lets go left right left up right hey theres nathshi yo Sup jacob do u have the key for these dam cahins im stauck and i cant get out without the key WHAT did u say i came any i need a key omfg im so dam stupid i guess i have to go back ok then well hury up this maze is going to blow up in 12 minutes o god. Where could the key Aha i got a idea use my long touge acroos the hole maze i fine key ow my tounge oo its the key dont worry nath got it lets get out thank u jacob but the guy who yoshinaped me is still alive. i know we will find him someday
To be contiued


BY:maishi

[Lazo]

What a mess. I don't think you put much effort into this either.

It's almost impossible to descern when one stops talking and the other begins. Dialogue is used inside these "": As the guardian descended upon the group, a voice boomed throughout the chamber "Cease, and Repent!" Gripping the Artifact tightly, Duke could only think of one appropriate commend... "Run for your lives!"

Never ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever(6.02*10^23) use ortho-ography, leet (1337), emoticons or any other internet-common shortcuts in stories. No, not even then.

[maishi]

Lazoshi said:

What a mess. I don't think you put much effort into this either.

It's almost impossible to descern when one stops talking and the other begins. Dialogue is used inside these "": As the guardian descended upon the group, a voice boomed throughout the chamber "Cease, and Repent!" Gripping the Artifact tightly, Duke could only think of one appropriate commend... "Run for your lives!" omfg im a damn new person so if u dont like it dont makeaa big deal

Never ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever(6.02*10^23) use ortho-ography, leet (1337), emoticons or any other internet-common shortcuts in stories. No, not even then.