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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 16, 2005 21:14:50 GMT -5
here is the info on CW: aTTYS
cast:
yoshiken
joshi
L.D.(me,narrator)
blinx(narrator)
terrence
lorina
general grivious
shad
story:
chrono worlds is the first of the yoshi saga
i have 5 serise in mind. CW itself is a story on how the races in hyrule and the mushroom kingdom worked together. the main characters are listed at the top.
chrono means time, so these stories are about time traveling. this is the story of a life time.
chapters:
1. the world starts
2. yoshi's and kokori of the forest
3. seperation
4. war breaks out
5. the droid army
6. epoch
7. foward to the past
8. the world breaker
9. peace lives on
this will be a funny story with many cameos
next book: chrono emerald
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 17, 2005 20:40:34 GMT -5
no one is replying
ch.1 the world starts
L.D.
in the beging, there was an empty void,then the great God said, "let there be a planet". then there was a planet,he called it.....earth. he put many creatures on the planet;yoshi's,humans,gorons,kokori,ect. he created a race called droids. they were a peaceful race. every one got along,but of course every one was primitive('cept the droids).
blinx
God then created a factory,a time factory. this factory kept
the history marked,they delivered time to the world. after that, God created space, which acording to the hitchkers guide to the galexy, is realy,realy big and all.
both
next is the story of two races,working together
to be continued....
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Post by Yoshee&Champ on May 17, 2005 21:14:24 GMT -5
Kool... sounds good  It's got an interesting exposition. Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy? Lol. |
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 17, 2005 21:16:14 GMT -5
i know,the whole set of stories have exscripts from it
ch.2 the yoshi's and kokori of the forest
L.D.
the peacefullest races on earth were the yoshi's and kokori. they worked to gether with their homes and such.
blinx
we have a recored file of the a meeting in this peacefull forest. " today we have the 6th meeting of the outside worlds debait" said mido. "todays debait is... is it a safe place" followed tim. "no it's not safe;their heartless out there; we don't need them", quarlled the kids and yoshi's. "can it" said tim. mido followed," we will soon have a talk with the droids on their opinion" "AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH"!!!!! a loud scream rang. "lorina,she's missing" cried mira and sakura.
"where did they go", said a worried tim. "a creature carried her to the woods" they both fainted. "who dares take this challege to find the girl" ,said mido. "me and terrence can find here" said an excited L.D."who me" said terrence. "sure,you know these woods like the bck of your hands" he replied. "you right.... hey thats new" said terrence,looking at his hands.
L.D.
they soon went into the woods. terrence no like the dark" whispered terrence. L.D. just groned and slaped his head. "L.D. no like babies" he followed. "are we there yet","no","are we there yet","no" this went on untill faint gigling was heard."shut up,you hear that" said a coutious L.D. "yeah",terrence replied.
end of part 1 of 2 in ch. 2
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Post by Yoshiken on May 18, 2005 18:23:25 GMT -5
WOOOT!!! yeah sure ill be in!!! sounds like an awesome story!! i love being in fan-fics!
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 18, 2005 20:23:47 GMT -5
who hoo
part 2
L.D.
terrence and L.D. ran tword the sound. "ok, i think we found lorina",whispered L.D. the looked and saw the strangest sight, lorina was playing with a neo-shadow(heartless). "that doesn't not make scence" ,terrence said, "heartless are well heartless". "lets find out whats going on" whispered L.D. "Hi guys" said yoshiken. "where did you come from" replyed terrence and L.D. "the vilage" he replyed. "what time is it" terrence asked. yoshiken replyed, "time is an illusion". terrence quickly replyed,"i want lunch". "lunctime dubly so" yoshiken finished.
blinx
they went into the clearing. "whats up" asked yoshiken to the suprised girl and the heartless. "i got carried away by staflos,shad here found me and saved me" she replyed. "i saved her also from the forest curse" said shad. "but your a heartless" said L.D. "you guys don't go well with other races" finished terrence. " i was actualy wating for you"said shad who had moved closer,no longer afraid. i must tell you that in three days the world will brack to war and the races will be seperated,only by getting the machien that can telport you through time, then you may save it" he explained. the three boys stood there. "how do you know this" asked L.D. "i'm a heartless,it's what i do" he said. the boys stood lossed again.
L.D.
"the vilage is worried about her" said yoshiken. shad had the "i know look on his expresionless face,which was strange because he couldn't do expretions, yet he had the "i know" look on there. "the girl will be returned shortly",he stood up,"after you beat me". the three knew a chalenge when it apeared,the drew their weopons. "lwe are masters at sword fighting" said yoshiken. "bring it on!",he shouted. SWISH,KLUN,WHOOSH. the swords were on the ground in seconds. "how the....." they all replyed "rember what i said" shad said as he disapeared. "what a sweat guy" said lorina.
blinx
so they four of them went back to the vilage and told everything. the leaders agreed to let them find the machine,but little did they know, they may not see each other again.
stay tuned for ch.3 seperation
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Post by Yoshiken on May 18, 2005 23:17:00 GMT -5
MYSTERIOUS CHAPTER ENDING!!! I AM VERY ANXIOUS FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 19, 2005 16:10:09 GMT -5
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Post by red.yoshi on May 19, 2005 17:59:01 GMT -5
already saw it, its really cool. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Post by Yoshee&Champ on May 19, 2005 21:58:09 GMT -5
^_^ it's really good, L.D. You may want to use capitalization a little more, it's hard to read after a while. Other than that, it flows pretty well. Good job on the cover, I like it |
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 23, 2005 15:36:24 GMT -5
L.D.
Welcome to another chapter in chrono worlds. I'd like to say that before I read this next chapter in this story,i'd like to say that in this chapter starts the war over the contenent.
Chapter 3: seperation
L.D.
It has been three hours since Tim and Mido let the four go find this time machine. "Are we out yet", asked a confused Terrence. "I know.lorina you know this place,where are", asked Yoshiken. she replyed, "How i'm I supposed to know,this is the lost woods". The boys answer was an expresion,that was like this:o_0. "I see light, we'er out of here",shouted an excited L.D. As they walked out of the forest they came to a town. "you there", said a strange man. "Us" the group said together. "yeah you",he replyed. "I bet your looking for something importaint right,of course i'm right. welcome to torra town". "Yeah" said yoshiken quietly. "Well, there just so happens to be a yoshi here into thats from another world" ,said the old man,"He can help you".
blinx
There lived a yoshi invetor in town. His name was Joshi. He had a fascination for the stuff they sell n torra town,so he settled there. The old man had pointed the house out to the four travelers. "Hello is anyone home",asked yoshiken,knocking on the door. "Yeah,come in",said a voice inside. They opened the door and walked in. "We are looking for a special machine",started Lorina. "You've heard of the epoch",Joshi replyed."No" was all they could say. "it's a special machine,can go through time,the only one that exsists so far,but the droids are the owners of it",replyed joshi. "hmmmmm....... so we have heard of it",said yoshiken. "by the way,before i decide if i can take you through the sands of time to the teleporter to the droids ship,what are your names", asked joshi? "yoshiken,L.D,Tarrence, lorina"they all replyed in unison. "Do you have any weapons or spells",joshi asked. "yep" they all replyed."Then lets go.
end of part 1
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Post by red.yoshi on May 23, 2005 16:12:50 GMT -5
sweet story l.d.! cant wait for next chaper, part i guess.
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Post by Yoshee&Champ on May 23, 2005 20:34:29 GMT -5
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Jun 16, 2005 11:00:51 GMT -5
the next part of the chapter is going to show up when my computer gets fixed
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jun 16, 2005 22:51:12 GMT -5
Cool. I can't wait ;D
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Post by Zippy on Jun 22, 2005 1:20:52 GMT -5
I can't wait either.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Jun 23, 2005 8:53:32 GMT -5
I luv the cover.
And I luv the plot.
And this is Luigi, still.
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Courtesy of Red. Yoshi. Thanks! 
