Book2-Nate's adventure T20E Chap7(Last chapter)

[nate]

Wow! we are at the last chapter already!
FORDEAD TRAIL
As Nate was spechless, he saw eyescar town! But wait... It's not...
Brutel:Is this my town? I can't remember...
Lava yosh:uh-oh...Brutel's turning back to normal...
Nate:......
Ember:C'mon Nate! What's with the quietness?
Nate:.....
Rad:Hmmm....This place is sure like eyescar town....
Lava yosh:exatly...
Gordon:Well well well, what do we have here?
Nate:....
Jayshi:I am not with you jerks! You just ruined my dragon form! And I still don't belive Nate anymore...
Ember:I thought Gordon was dead!
Cayoshi,CJ,Red,Anjil,Yoshiken,Jacobthehero,yoshiwannabe,
Pink floyd,Stolen,midnight,L.D and meket,Timmy yoshi and yoshi soul:Not so fast!
Nate:....?
Lava yosh:You guys are back!
Red:heh...well we just came to stop by...
CJ:This place is weird...But let's beat them up!
BAMF!!!
Tempest:Hmm? Maybe I would like to play by?
Digi:I think there's a fight going on. Let's just fight too..
Tempest:What ever you say...
Gordon:AHH!! RUN!!!
Jayshi:Okay losers! Let's show some real fighting!
Nate:.....
Lava yosh:Bring it on!!!

LAST BOSS
Everybody fights!

<Nate command>:mega beam
Jayshi loses 999999 hp!!!!!!
Jayshi is destroyed!!

Jayshi:I had enough!
CJ:Well, I got this sword!
Red:Umm...Where did you get that sword?
CJ:Oh I stole it from this FF cloud guy..
Digi:Umm...Jayshi? Is that you?
Jayshi:.....
Lava yosh:Fine! If you like evil soo much..Then have Brutel!
*Brutel turns back to normal*
Brutel:Wha?! You guys again!? Well no more! EMAVREY!!
BOOOMM!!!!
Suddenly everything was queit.... everyone exept Nate was gone.....
1 year later..
Lava yosh:Gosh.I can't find Nate....
Rad:Me ether...
THE END
So then.... eyscar town was named Fordead trail for now on.... But where is Nate? Find out on the next book of Nate's adventure:The glowing dreams...

[Yin]

*Claps* Excelent!! Truly, truly excelent!! ;D I really want to see the next one.

[Enrique]

Good job, Nate! I can't wait to see the sequel.

[Wildfire the Dragon]

Nice Job Nate. But...WHY AM I EVIL?!!! If I was evil, I couldn't gain my powers and have a dragon companion.
I'm over reacting again...I like it alot. Can I ask you a small question? Will I be good again? I hate the darkness...

[UMS Author Lava]

Hey, maybe if we can convince Brutel to be good... Well, it'd be worth a try.
And can Fantasy Guy come in?