NATE'S ADVENTURE3:GD-CHAPTER4(half1)

[nate]

~Updates~
Coming soon a spanish Nate's adventure book will be coming soon! So keep learning spanish!XDDD
Dreamz the dark dream master
Ember:Where are we?
Rad:*whaps head on the ground* get this thing off me!!!!
Red:Shut down! I just heard somthing!
Fantasy guy:well let's hope it isn't that dark yoshee...
Ember:I don't think so... She's outside.... but champs mouth is biteing Rad's head...
Fantasy guy:hah! That would be funny...
???:And who can think that someone can just barge in a dream cloud?
Red:Ummm...us?
???:Wrong! I Dreamz shall make your bad dreams come true!
Ember:Ahhh!!! NO!! I don't want that beast to kill me!
Rad:Actully, having a evil chao on my head is a good enough bad dream for me...
Fantasy guy:tell me about it...
Dreamz:muhahaha!!!!

To be continued....
know why? because I'm sleepy and tired..XDD So let's break a half here kay?XDDD

[Enrique]

AH! The suspense! Good job for this half!

YAY! A Spanish version! I can't wait!

[UMS Author Lava]

Dreamz. Thats sounds like a cute and funny name for an entity of darkness. XD
Oh god!! My first XD!!! XD

[Lord of the Dance]

LOL good job! I can't wait for the...um... 2nd half of the chapter! XD

[Gene L.D. Ryoko]

when do i come in