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Post by Enrique on Jul 30, 2005 21:50:02 GMT -5
Sorry about the delay between chapters. I've been kind of busy lately, and I only really work on this in my spare time.
Chapter 4 - The Maniac
17:00 - The remains of Yoshi's Island Enrique, Ishathod, John, Yoshee, & Champ look for survivors of the explosion. John: <sigh> Are we ever going to find anyone who survived? Enrique: John, it's only been about an hour. A shadow is seen in the distance. Champ: ‹Who's that?› Yoshee: ‹I don't know, Champ...› ??: Who are you?! Enrique: Who do we look like? ??: What are you doing here? Can't you see you should've been dead?! Enrique: Well, what if we actually prepared? ??: How did you know about the explosion?! Enrique: Idiots on the radio spilled the beans... Who are you, anyways? ??: I'm Maniac. And you will DIE!!! Enrique: Don't even think about it!!! Maniac: You wanna be the first to go?! Enrique: I believe you have me mistaken for yourself! Enrique and Maniac start to fight. Enrique: John! I need some help here! Maniac pins Enrique to the ground. Maniac: Don't even think about saving your little friend! To be continued...
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 31, 2005 11:28:42 GMT -5
Short, but exciting. I can't wait to see the next one! Great job ;D
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Post by Johnyoshi on Jul 31, 2005 14:16:42 GMT -5
short,but good
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