Post by Shoe on Aug 23, 2005 20:00:48 GMT -5
Chapter 3
I fell back and when I just about hit the ground he kicked me in my rib with so much force that I felt and heard my ribs snap in two during the impact. I spiraled to the ground in pain. He charged at me and jumped getting ready for the next attack. I felt his aura, it was getting stronger and darker. He was forming it into a ball. I saw my chance and filled with ice cold rage. I focused hard on my target and shifted my hand up and with it came a large stalagmite of ice which just grazed his leg, that was the only damage it did. 'He's too fast I'll never get him the way I'm carrying on!' I thought. He laughed mockingly and sent the powerful bolt of energy at me. I jumped out of the way and saw as darkness engulfed the place I was standing at. It was still too powerful and sent me flying upwards. I formed a thin layer of ice and started skating on it, as I neared him I made it steeper so I went faster but he tricked me. I saw his attack coming and tried to jump but I was to late. He sent his fist with blinding speed and enormous power through my side. I skidded across the dark ground and grasped my side. It was bleeding tremendously and didn't help my broken ribs much. I slammed my fist on the ground. "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!? I HAVE DONE NOTHING TO YOU!!" He walked over to me and looked down upon me. "Your pathetic!" He kicked my rib and I cried in agony. "You are supposed to be a hero," he mocked, "your supposed to be the savior of your pathetic little island!" He kicked me again. "Your no hero your not even worthy enough to be alive!" He kicked me harder and I spat up blood. "So why don't I end your pathetic life here!" He drew some sort of circle with the blood from his leg on the ground and placed his hand on it. It glowed eerily and he pulled a long blade out of the ground. "Alchemy?" He looked at me and turned me over then dug his foot into me to make sure I couldn't move. "Yes, I use alchemy along with the art of ninjitsu, an old koopa taught me some tricks along with bringing me into his home," he said. 'Kamek, I knew he had to be behind this!' I thought. "Toshi I bid you farewell, oh and I'll be sure to deal with your brothers and that pretty little sister of yours, too!" I snapped. Just as he was raising the blade above me I secretly formed an icicle around my hand and broke free of him. "You will not lay a hand on any of them...especially my sister!!" I drove the spike into his chest. He let out a terrible scream. I sliced across him and struck him again in his shoulder before he could do anything. "Tell Kamek that if he ever does a foolish thing like sending a weakling like you to deal with me, I'll kill you both!" I released him and he slumped to the ground shaking. I started to walk away but then he laughed and I turned to him and felt tremendous pain in my leg. I looked down and his blade was stuck fast in my leg and nailed into the ground, " Your not going anywhere! If I die... YOU'LL DIE WITH ME!!!!" he drew another circle in the ground with his blood and laid his hand upon it. It started to from a figure of a demon 'This can't be possible...it defies logic what is he doing, he can't create life with alchemy unless he has the fifth element...' He laughed again, "May I remind you where we are?" he asked as the demon began to form a torso, "this'll be quite a shock but...we are in your demonic conscience, you see after you defeated my master and that pathetic koopa Bowser, Master Kamek cast a demon inside of you and that is where we are." I looked as the demon formed it started to change into the form of me. It sneered and ran towards me, I tried to move but he pain of the sword and the sword itself held me fast to the ground. It was almost upon me when I saw a blinding light come out of nowhere and the demon me froze in it's tracks. "Man, what now?" I yelled. I looked over at the boy who was screaming, "NO!!! GO AWAY I ALMOST HAVE POSSESSION OF HIM, THE DEMON IS ALMOST LOOSE!!!!" I saw a person come from the light and cast their hand out. Everything was swept away, all the darkness and demons, and even the young dark yoshi boy. All remained was the mysterious stranger and me. "Hello, Toshi." It was a girl, "I'm sorry for the trouble that my brother Shadow has caused you, I could prevent from the demon taking over your conscience but that's all I can do for you now." I looked at her as my eyes adjusted. She was about the same size as Chishi and was glowing like the sun, no, brighter than that. She dimmed down until I could see her as if she were a normal yoshi, She had blondish-brown hair and was a white yoshi with red eyes and was wearing, well normal clothes for what I could tell. "Who are you people, and how did you know my name?" She looked at me, smiled, and said, "You must have forgotten me, but of course I have changed a bit." Then upon saying that I looked at her harder and recognized her, "WAIT! Your that girl that I found at that tower when I was younger, the one trapped in the egg, Garden!" She laughed cheerfully, "Yes, yes! You do remember me, Kamek imprisoned me at his tower which is located deep within Lava Lava Volcano and is training Shadow to kill you and your brothers...I think he likes your sister though..." My eye twitched at that last part and I looked up at her and asked, "Well I'm glad to finally see you again but...how do I get out of this place?" Garden smiled and waved at me, then before I knew it I was back out in the real world in bed with Yoshi and Chishi wrapping me up in bandages who were yelling at the others that I awoke. "WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU BRO YOUR ALL BLOODY!!" Boshi asked ecstatically. I looked at my side and ribs which where bruised and bleeding. The attacks Shadow inflicted on me in my mind must have caused damage to me in reality too. I looked at everyone standing around me. "I'll explain later...how long was I out?" They all exchanged glances and finally Yoshi said, "Um...about a week." I fell back on my bed and breathed deeply. I wondered how I would explain everything to them. I know Chishi and Yoshi would believe me but I'm not so sure about the rest, and how was I supposed to save Garden and find out more about that demon. I decided to think of it later for now I was just glad to be back with my brothers and sister laughing and crying at the same time.
GEEEEEz!! That was the longest chapter yet! Im beat...I would have been on sooner but my mom was on the computer and wouldn't get off...I need an ice pack for my hands 
Chapter 4 will be here soon...I know I told you guys I would make a picture each chapter but my hands are about to fall off Ill make pictures for chapter 3 and 4 tomorrow! 
Oh well it was worth it and im satisfied ;D
I fell back and when I just about hit the ground he kicked me in my rib with so much force that I felt and heard my ribs snap in two during the impact. I spiraled to the ground in pain. He charged at me and jumped getting ready for the next attack. I felt his aura, it was getting stronger and darker. He was forming it into a ball. I saw my chance and filled with ice cold rage. I focused hard on my target and shifted my hand up and with it came a large stalagmite of ice which just grazed his leg, that was the only damage it did. 'He's too fast I'll never get him the way I'm carrying on!' I thought. He laughed mockingly and sent the powerful bolt of energy at me. I jumped out of the way and saw as darkness engulfed the place I was standing at. It was still too powerful and sent me flying upwards. I formed a thin layer of ice and started skating on it, as I neared him I made it steeper so I went faster but he tricked me. I saw his attack coming and tried to jump but I was to late. He sent his fist with blinding speed and enormous power through my side. I skidded across the dark ground and grasped my side. It was bleeding tremendously and didn't help my broken ribs much. I slammed my fist on the ground. "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!? I HAVE DONE NOTHING TO YOU!!" He walked over to me and looked down upon me. "Your pathetic!" He kicked my rib and I cried in agony. "You are supposed to be a hero," he mocked, "your supposed to be the savior of your pathetic little island!" He kicked me again. "Your no hero your not even worthy enough to be alive!" He kicked me harder and I spat up blood. "So why don't I end your pathetic life here!" He drew some sort of circle with the blood from his leg on the ground and placed his hand on it. It glowed eerily and he pulled a long blade out of the ground. "Alchemy?" He looked at me and turned me over then dug his foot into me to make sure I couldn't move. "Yes, I use alchemy along with the art of ninjitsu, an old koopa taught me some tricks along with bringing me into his home," he said. 'Kamek, I knew he had to be behind this!' I thought. "Toshi I bid you farewell, oh and I'll be sure to deal with your brothers and that pretty little sister of yours, too!" I snapped. Just as he was raising the blade above me I secretly formed an icicle around my hand and broke free of him. "You will not lay a hand on any of them...especially my sister!!" I drove the spike into his chest. He let out a terrible scream. I sliced across him and struck him again in his shoulder before he could do anything. "Tell Kamek that if he ever does a foolish thing like sending a weakling like you to deal with me, I'll kill you both!" I released him and he slumped to the ground shaking. I started to walk away but then he laughed and I turned to him and felt tremendous pain in my leg. I looked down and his blade was stuck fast in my leg and nailed into the ground, " Your not going anywhere! If I die... YOU'LL DIE WITH ME!!!!" he drew another circle in the ground with his blood and laid his hand upon it. It started to from a figure of a demon 'This can't be possible...it defies logic what is he doing, he can't create life with alchemy unless he has the fifth element...' He laughed again, "May I remind you where we are?" he asked as the demon began to form a torso, "this'll be quite a shock but...we are in your demonic conscience, you see after you defeated my master and that pathetic koopa Bowser, Master Kamek cast a demon inside of you and that is where we are." I looked as the demon formed it started to change into the form of me. It sneered and ran towards me, I tried to move but he pain of the sword and the sword itself held me fast to the ground. It was almost upon me when I saw a blinding light come out of nowhere and the demon me froze in it's tracks. "Man, what now?" I yelled. I looked over at the boy who was screaming, "NO!!! GO AWAY I ALMOST HAVE POSSESSION OF HIM, THE DEMON IS ALMOST LOOSE!!!!" I saw a person come from the light and cast their hand out. Everything was swept away, all the darkness and demons, and even the young dark yoshi boy. All remained was the mysterious stranger and me. "Hello, Toshi." It was a girl, "I'm sorry for the trouble that my brother Shadow has caused you, I could prevent from the demon taking over your conscience but that's all I can do for you now." I looked at her as my eyes adjusted. She was about the same size as Chishi and was glowing like the sun, no, brighter than that. She dimmed down until I could see her as if she were a normal yoshi, She had blondish-brown hair and was a white yoshi with red eyes and was wearing, well normal clothes for what I could tell. "Who are you people, and how did you know my name?" She looked at me, smiled, and said, "You must have forgotten me, but of course I have changed a bit." Then upon saying that I looked at her harder and recognized her, "WAIT! Your that girl that I found at that tower when I was younger, the one trapped in the egg, Garden!" She laughed cheerfully, "Yes, yes! You do remember me, Kamek imprisoned me at his tower which is located deep within Lava Lava Volcano and is training Shadow to kill you and your brothers...I think he likes your sister though..." My eye twitched at that last part and I looked up at her and asked, "Well I'm glad to finally see you again but...how do I get out of this place?" Garden smiled and waved at me, then before I knew it I was back out in the real world in bed with Yoshi and Chishi wrapping me up in bandages who were yelling at the others that I awoke. "WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU BRO YOUR ALL BLOODY!!" Boshi asked ecstatically. I looked at my side and ribs which where bruised and bleeding. The attacks Shadow inflicted on me in my mind must have caused damage to me in reality too. I looked at everyone standing around me. "I'll explain later...how long was I out?" They all exchanged glances and finally Yoshi said, "Um...about a week." I fell back on my bed and breathed deeply. I wondered how I would explain everything to them. I know Chishi and Yoshi would believe me but I'm not so sure about the rest, and how was I supposed to save Garden and find out more about that demon. I decided to think of it later for now I was just glad to be back with my brothers and sister laughing and crying at the same time.
GEEEEEz!! That was the longest chapter yet! Im beat...I would have been on sooner but my mom was on the computer and wouldn't get off...I need an ice pack for my hands Chapter 4 will be here soon...I know I told you guys I would make a picture each chapter but my hands are about to fall off Ill make pictures for chapter 3 and 4 tomorrow! Oh well it was worth it and im satisfied ;D 
