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Post by Lord of the Dance on Oct 7, 2005 21:30:30 GMT -5
I volunteer too!
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 7, 2005 22:07:22 GMT -5
let's a-go! (next day after the drive in) Ultraloco:zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz -_- Timyoshi: Ultraloco! (I hit the roof again) Ultraloco: owwww  yes? Timyoshi: the peech creek and dragon river sheriffs are here. Ultraloco: oh! I better get going!  (shows me and timmy running over to the female sherriffs) Yoshee: howdy! Yinyoshi: hey! Ultraloco:nice to see you guys! I hear you're have highway problems. is this true? Yoshee: yep. Ultraloco: alright, I better get the steam auto. (starts powering up steam automotive) Steam auto: toot! toot! (shows timyoshi,me and the other sheriffs bording the steam auto, then shows it chuffing off to peech creek.) |
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Post by Yin on Oct 7, 2005 22:14:20 GMT -5
Yeah! Me in it! ;D
Me happy now.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Oct 7, 2005 23:10:21 GMT -5
XD Howdy!
You're getting better at the dialogue, Loco. Keep going! It's starting to flow a little smoother ^^
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 8, 2005 20:20:47 GMT -5
oh! guys, jus' let me know if there's a part you want me to put in the next part!
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 8, 2005 20:25:03 GMT -5
You can put me in if you want!
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 9, 2005 12:53:47 GMT -5
(shows steam auto chuffing over to peech creek highway) Ultraloco: we're here! ;D Yoshee: finally! potrol time! Ultraloco: Yoshee, you take that one wheeled thing called the overbike, Yinyosh, take the flying skateboard,timmy, take the overwing. Timyoshi:sweet! (the back of the steam auto opens to reviel the overbike, the one wheeled, hot-air powered bike, the overwing, a steam-driven sled that flys, the super skateboard, a hoverboard that goes very fast) Yinyoshi:Ultraloco, arn't you going to ride one of those things?  Ultraloco: no, I'll drive the steam automotive. (in the distance, a automobile approches) Yinyoshi: finally! my depcuty Yoshifrog's here! Yoshifrog: I'm here!  Yinyoshi: c'mon frog, better get ready for patrol duty. Ultraloco: we're off! (I drive the steam auto down the highway) suddenly, a shadowy figure on a horse hops on the steam auto. Ultraloco: huh? what was that? |
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Post by Yin on Oct 9, 2005 15:52:33 GMT -5
Wee! A hover board! And I have deputy too! Your story is going very well with proper grammar.
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 9, 2005 16:00:03 GMT -5
Yay! I am a deputy! A person of authority. "dun dun dun" You're in for it now bad peoples!
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 9, 2005 16:19:55 GMT -5
the overwing,overbike, and super skateboard are veicals from code lyoko, only old west style.
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Post by Yin on Oct 9, 2005 16:53:46 GMT -5
Oooohhhh, so are you going to post the next part? Huh? Huh? I can't stand suspense.
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 9, 2005 17:15:22 GMT -5
( I walk up to where I had heard the bump) Ultraloco: h-hello? the shadowy figure revels to be................................ KIND DRAGON! Ultraloco: Kind dragon? shouldn't you be with your tribe? Yoshifrog (in telegraph): Ultraloco! are you there? I have a speeder coming your way at 40 mph, can you take care of him? Ultraloco: o.k. (looks at kind dragon) sorry k.d., but duty calls!  (shows dork racing incredibly fast) Joe koopa: yeeeeeeeehaaaaaa! I'm king of the highway!!!! >U< (I pull a lever that causes one of the arms of the steam auto to block Joe's path) Joe koopa: woohoo! whiskey and burgers tonight! but sadly, Joe's road rampage is brought to an end when his horse trips over the arm, and his wagon is sent flying, Joe then jumps out. Ultraloco: alright, you're going 40 in a 30 mph zone I'll need $50 from you. Joe koopa:what!?!  that much? alright, 50 bucks for your highway's troubles. Ultraloco: thank you, your wagon is over there. (returns over to K.D.) Kind Dragon: I know what you're thinking, but I'm here because yesterday, I became a man at the rank ceremony, my dad said in order to become a good chief I have to join you in saving the day from evil. Ultraloco: wow, Well since you're a man now, and you're going to be part of my squad, I'll give you the nickname of....... Robbie. |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 9, 2005 17:18:52 GMT -5
*claps* I get a telegraph! Good job so far!
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Oct 9, 2005 18:02:47 GMT -5
the overwing,overbike, and super skateboard are veicals from code lyoko, only old west style. i don't remeber those,they three skateboards and a scooter |
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 9, 2005 18:23:42 GMT -5
actually, if you watch the new episodes, in lyoko they get cool veicals besides the ones in the sewer.
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Oct 9, 2005 18:31:17 GMT -5
dunno when it's on
also critism time
your spellings off
it's hard to follow
and ......i dunno ><
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 9, 2005 19:51:12 GMT -5
Well L.D., It was pretty easy to read.
I don't mind critique, as long as it's said nicely-
"You are improving on grammar and spelling, but it still needs some work"- for example.
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Post by Yoshiken on Oct 10, 2005 21:22:06 GMT -5
XD! wow, Kind Dragon is so much like his father XD
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Post by Ultraloco on Oct 12, 2005 18:21:45 GMT -5
let's-a go again!
(shows steam auto chuffing back to town)
Ultraloco: K.D., just to let you know me and timyoshi's job isn't easy.
K.D.: I understand, tomorrow I'll be showing a special something to you, it will be helpful to your missions.
Ultraloco:O.K.
Timyoshi: we're here! see you tomorrow!
K.D.: bye!
(shows steam auto chuffing into the garage)
Ultraloco: see you tomorrow Tim!
Timyoshi: alright, I better get home, mom's making pizza for dinner tonight!
( I lock up the door to the office. )
Ultraloco: well, I better get to Jeremiah's diner, they're serving chinese!
(runs off to the diner)
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Post by Yoshifrog on Oct 12, 2005 18:28:59 GMT -5
Short, but cool! CHINESE! Yum!
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