Post by Andreshi on May 1, 2006 22:01:34 GMT -5
]Ok, I started this fan fic about a month and a half and I've only gotten to chapter 4 (and a status report), so I'll just see how this fares here, also, it is written in script form, because that is how I write, ok here goes nothing. Edit: I would appreciate comments, even bad ones.[
(several miles off the coast of Yoshi's Island)
??~ I've finally done it, I've created the ultimate weapon, PROJECT OMEGA.
Xell~ *knocks down the door* Stop right there Proffesor Azy. You're surrounded, so don't do anything you'll regret.
Azy~ No, you'll never take PROJECT OMEGA from me. *pushes a button that sends out a blinding light*
Xell and agents~ Gahh!
Azy~ Ha, now nobody can have OMEGA.
Xell~ What have you done?!?
Azy~ I have sent OMEGA to another world, a... less knowing world.
Xell~ Fool, do you know what you've done.
Azy~ I've created the ultimate weapon.
Xell~ You committed kidnapping, experimented on another yoshi, made it a living weapon, and sent it to another world.
Azy~ Yes, ahahaha. *pushes a button that opens a trapdoor that closes after he escapes*
Xell~ Hey! Shoot, he escaped.
??~ *over ear piece* So did you captured Proffesor Azy.
Xell~ No, he got away, and he sent PROJECT OMEGA to another world.
??~ Hmmm. Get back to base, we'll get Proffesor Kir Azy later
Xell~ Roger that.
*several hours later*
??1~ *after seeing the video recorded in Azy's lab* Well, what did we learn from this video.
??2~ Always look for buttons.
??3~ Always use dark gogles incase of blinding lights.
??4~ Never let the badguy escape.
Xell~ Never let the destructive weapon escape.
??1~ Hmmm... well, whatever. Since PROJECT OMEGA has escaped we'll just have to hunt him down, now won't we.
??2,3,4~ *mumble mumble*
??1~ Xell, you seem quiet about this matter, I trust you don't have any objections, now do you?
Xell~ No, except that the weapon we're hunting for is only 13 years old.
??1~ Great, now we just have to find out how we'll get to Earth2, the place where OMEGA was sent
(meanwhile in Earth2 in the Mistyc Ruins area)
Sonic~ *runs along when he trips over something* Whoa, what was that. *looks at the ground and sees a unfamiliar body* Hey, where'd you from?
??~ *no answer*
Sonic~ Hey are you ok?
??~ *still no answer*
Sonic~ Hmmm... *feels for a pulse* He's just uncouscience, better take him to Tails.
PROLOGUE: CREATION
(several miles off the coast of Yoshi's Island)
??~ I've finally done it, I've created the ultimate weapon, PROJECT OMEGA.
Xell~ *knocks down the door* Stop right there Proffesor Azy. You're surrounded, so don't do anything you'll regret.
Azy~ No, you'll never take PROJECT OMEGA from me. *pushes a button that sends out a blinding light*
Xell and agents~ Gahh!
Azy~ Ha, now nobody can have OMEGA.
Xell~ What have you done?!?
Azy~ I have sent OMEGA to another world, a... less knowing world.
Xell~ Fool, do you know what you've done.
Azy~ I've created the ultimate weapon.
Xell~ You committed kidnapping, experimented on another yoshi, made it a living weapon, and sent it to another world.
Azy~ Yes, ahahaha. *pushes a button that opens a trapdoor that closes after he escapes*
Xell~ Hey! Shoot, he escaped.
??~ *over ear piece* So did you captured Proffesor Azy.
Xell~ No, he got away, and he sent PROJECT OMEGA to another world.
??~ Hmmm. Get back to base, we'll get Proffesor Kir Azy later
Xell~ Roger that.
*several hours later*
??1~ *after seeing the video recorded in Azy's lab* Well, what did we learn from this video.
??2~ Always look for buttons.
??3~ Always use dark gogles incase of blinding lights.
??4~ Never let the badguy escape.
Xell~ Never let the destructive weapon escape.
??1~ Hmmm... well, whatever. Since PROJECT OMEGA has escaped we'll just have to hunt him down, now won't we.
??2,3,4~ *mumble mumble*
??1~ Xell, you seem quiet about this matter, I trust you don't have any objections, now do you?
Xell~ No, except that the weapon we're hunting for is only 13 years old.
??1~ Great, now we just have to find out how we'll get to Earth2, the place where OMEGA was sent
(meanwhile in Earth2 in the Mistyc Ruins area)
Sonic~ *runs along when he trips over something* Whoa, what was that. *looks at the ground and sees a unfamiliar body* Hey, where'd you from?
??~ *no answer*
Sonic~ Hey are you ok?
??~ *still no answer*
Sonic~ Hmmm... *feels for a pulse* He's just uncouscience, better take him to Tails.
