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Post by eloeem on May 13, 2006 14:18:46 GMT -5
Ok, I just got myself to make my story as a fan fic, well, ENJOY!!!!
The Beginning:
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A White Yoshi boy in the age of 7, where wandering around in a bark world. All he could see, was the dark, stary sky. In a distance, he thought he noticed a star, in the far horizon, shot from the heaven, and the long white tail to it, looked like a cut trough the darkness around him. The Yoshi looked at the white tail, as it started to expand.
The surroundings became visible by the light, and all around him, he noticed white dots emerge on the ground he was standing on. He began to run the opposite direction of the flash, but tripped on a white dot. The white glow, with a blast, suddenly surrounded him. The Yoshi screamed as he fell downwards.
The fall came to a slow stop. The Yoshi stopped screaming, and he hovered in the air, like he was swimming in water. He began to take swimming strokes to get forward, and he noticed a little picture, floating in the air.
He swam towards the picture, and grabbed it. He looked at it with a curios face, and saw two Yoshis with two eggs in the arms. Both of the Yoshis where white, and the egg the left Yoshi held was white, but the right egg was black spotted. Both of the Yoshis looked happy and smiled. In the back of the picture was a store named: Salvo’s Blades. The store was round with a stick roof, but beside it, was a new house, squared, with a flat roof.
The Yoshi boy began to give a small smile as he heard voices: “… NO, We can’t let them both live! “ A man like voice said. He got ambushed by words from a woman like voice; “So what do you think we should do? Decide the death to a soon hatchling ? What if the Sage where wrong? Maybe it have gone by now!.”
The male gave a sigh, and proceeded; “You know why you got that amulet! And as soon as they hatch, you got to give BOTH of them one, but you got only ONE! One in the entire WORLD! And we can’t risk to repeat the old history…”
The woman began to cry, and then the Picture began to move: The sun went down, and from the Store, a Yoshi runned to the left, holding a egg in the arms. Then the sky of the picture became red, and all the houses vanished, the ground burning and black creatures running around on the ground. One of the creatures looked like he had noticed the Yoshi look at him, and jumped toward him, grabbing out of the picture, and held a hard grip on the young Yoshis throat, trying to suffocate him.
The Yoshi screamed and sat himself up in the bed, hyperventilating. Trough the door, he saw one of the Yoshis on the picture standing and looking at him.
“Are you all right?” the Yoshi said, walking toward the young one on the bed. The adult Yoshi hugged the kid, and whispered “It’s all right Eloeem. Sweaty, don’t be afraid, mommy’s here.” Eloeem began to calmed down a bit, then started to cry. “Mom… Don’t let it take me!” “No, no, no. it’s just a nightmare… shhh… don’t worry… now, get back to sleep, it’s school tomorrow…”
Eloeem calmed down, and lied back down with the head tilted to the right on the pillow. He’s face was filled with tares, but the mother wiped them away with the thumb. “Good night sweaty…” She said, walking out the door backwards, letting the door be opened so a light from the hallway shined trough.
When she’d left, Eloeem looked at the clock nearby, on the bedside table ”2 : 43 AM” he thought, letting out a big sigh and put he’s head with face down on the pillow. “Tomorrow it’s school again… not good…” he thought before slowly falling asleep.
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I will work more on it when somone post a reply: Critique and comments welcome^^
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Post by eloeem on May 23, 2006 0:31:28 GMT -5
so, jea, my latest chapters... no one replyed yet so I guessed the story was a bit to boring for moast of you, but anyway, here they are. Enjoy ^^
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After the summer:
“blip blip blip blip blip blip-” The clock ringed. Eloeem shot he’s eyes open and hit a button on top of the clock, making the clock stop ring. He sighed and looked up at the ceiling, looking straight on a poster he made as a project for the school when he was in first grey. On the poster it was a title: “All Yoshis should be friends” on the middle, the poster was torn apart into two peaces, but he’s dad had taped it, and fastened it to the ceiling, so Eloeem could remember how much work he put into it: 16 different Yoshis, all got a name over it, showing who the different Yoshis was. But there was fore names he glared at with ice cold eyes, as he did all days sense he made it. Eloeem sat on the side of the bed, looking down on the already ready made backpack. He frowned, and jumped down on the flour, taking the shoes on, then the red sweatshirt, making it cover a amulet he had on him, then the blue fingerless gloves. Eloeem took out a little picture from below the bed, showing the two Yoshis holding the Yoshieggs. “why?” he thought. Eloeem looked at it a while, then heard he’s mom: “Eloeem? Breakfast! Go wash your hands now!” “OK!” he replied simply, and placed the picture back underneath the bed. He took the backpack in one of the straps, and moved it outside the room before he went to the room on the other side of the corridor, and walked into a bathroom. He didn’t bother look around, but placed one hand below the sink, and turned it on with the other, feeling if it was to cold or hot. When he got the right temperature, he took the soap on the side of the sink, and washed he’s hands thorough. “Eloeem!!” He’s dad shouted, “Where are my key? You was supposed to place it back after you borrowed it tomorrow!” Eloeem swallowed and shouted back: “I.. I think it is on the oven” Eloeem took the towel beside the sink and wiped the hands dry. “WHY YOU-?!” He’s father said, “Never mind.” Eloeem heard he’s dad took the keys, and rushed out the door. “Bye love!” he shouted before shutting the door behind him. Eloeem sighed and walked to the kitchen with the backpack on, and with a big frown on the face, looking sad. “Something wrong?” he’s mother asked. “No, I’m just tired, that’s all!” He forced a smile forth and looked happy as ever. “Well, ok then, here’s your breakfast-” She placed a plate with 3 slices of bread with blueberry jam. “-Eat up, and go to school. I’m going to go sleep again after you waked me in the middle of the night.” Eloeem looked a bit sad when she said it, and ate one bread slice with one bite. He’s mom gave him a kiss on the forehead, and walked towards her bedroom. Eloeem looked at her, as she walked away from the kitchen. Eloeem ate both the remaining lam bread slices at once, and looked at the clock over the fridge beside the window. “7:30… why me?” Eloeem thought and closed he’s eyes, sighing and walked towards the door to the street. No one was waiting for him, a good sign. “Bye mom.” he said before closing the door and adjusting the backpack, so it should be a little more comfortable for he’s back. Eloeem started walking down the street, and looked around, to see if there was anyone on it. No one on the street either, this was strange for Eloeem, usually the streets where filled with people, but this time, the only thing he could see was a cat licking it’s paw on the roof of a kennel to a long dead dog to the neighbors. Eloeem sighed with relief and walked to the right, toward the school. At the school, he noticed some kids playing on the playground before school time. Eloeem smiled a bit not spotting anyone else then the kids, 9 of them in he’s class, 6 girls and 3 boys. When they noticed Eloeem, they stopped playing, and turned their back to him, talking to each other. Eloeem soon realized they didn’t want to let him play with them, so he walked up to the stairs to the big school. As he did, more and more people came to the school, and started spreading on the playground. Eloeem noticed the fore on he’s poster joining in as well, 2 green, a dark blue and a black Yoshi. The black Yoshii where the other ones leader, and the strongest one in the class, named Derek. Derek saw Eloeem sitting on the stairs, and turned to the group, talking. Eloeem began to feel a bit scared, and wanted to run, but as he was about to get up, the school bell ringed, and the doors got unlocked, letting the kids go inside. Eloeem got up fast, and walked as fast as he could to he’s classroom, where he got met by he’s teacher in the door. She was a big light blue Yoshi, with glasses and a small hat with a feather sticking out of it. “Now, you where fast Eloeem, long time no see.” she said friendly to him, “Err, hello.” Eloeem replied fast and went to he’s table, placing he’s backpack beneath the table, and placed doth hands on the table, waiting. The teacher raised an eyebrow, and sat down at her table waiting for the rest of the class, whom came fast into the classroom. When all of the students where sitting on their own places, the teacher presented the day: “Ok class, This is the first day on school after a LONG vacation, and I want to hear what all of you did this summer, ok? Who want to go first?” A little pink girl Yoshi raised one arm, and said revealingly: ”Can I, can I be first?” Eloeem didn’t bother to look at her, he just placed both hands on the table and sat still, listening to what she had to say.
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The Bad Break:
After the pink Yoshi had gone back to the desk, after she told about the exiting vacation on Yoshi’s Island, Eloeem looked out the window in the classroom, and could see the playground and that someone had forgotten their backpack in the gravel, beside the sandpit. Eloeem rested he’s head on the right hand, as he looked more out the window to the left. The teacher gave a random call to the 16 Yoshis in the classroom, all of them stood up, and told what they did in the summer. The school bell ringed to lunch; “Oh, the clock is SO much already?” the noise in the classroom went up a bit, but stopped again as the teacher talked again; “now, all of you can go to the cantina. After the break we are going to draw a bit. go now.” All of the Yoshis stood up, except the teacher, who sat back down on the chair, working on something. Eloeem waited as the rest of the Yoshis in the class had gone, then went himself. The teacher didn’t notice him, as if she was ignoring him. Eloeem looked at the ground as he walked down the Locker corridor, not notice anything but that he’s shoe got a small black spot on it. “When did I get that?” Eloeem thought, and bended down to scrub it away. After he got it all away, he stood up, then got surprised: two Yoshis, one dark blue and one green. Eloeem turned, wanting to go the other way, but stopped before he took another step: Another green Yoshi stood there, a bit taller than the other one, and A black Yoshi stood beside him. “You haven’t forgot about us, have you?” Derek said with a grin on the face, and a evil pair of eyes. Both of the eyes where filled with hate, Ice cold. Eloeem could feel the cold gazed upon him. Eloeem simply didn’t say anything, only stood there. “Anyway-” Derek continued “-Now as we are back, you might start pay, or else-” Eloeem noticed the other two had come up behind him, and they both grabbed he’s shoulders. Eloeem got a bad feeling, remembering he left the lunch money back home, and said with a whispering voice: “I, I don’t got any money” Eloeem tilted the head to the ground, closing the eyes slowly waiting for the worst. Derek said as he walked in circles around Eloeem: “You know, now as we older, we also grow stronger, witch means we can do more damage,” Derek gave Eloeem a hard punch to the stomach, making Eloeem fall to the ground. “You feel it? I can make it stop, or make it even worse,” he kicked Eloeem’s side. letting out a little groan, Eloeem was helpless on the ground. “Tomorrow, give them, or I will make that the worst day in your life!” Derek made some commands with he’s hands, then the two who was holding Eloeem, picked him up, and threw him into one open locker, making him hit the inner wall. The two Yoshis closed the door and turned the code-lock around, making it impossible to open it. From the outside, Eloeem could hear them laughing, and walking down the corridor as one of them said: “Let’s tell the teacher he’s truancy!” “Great idea!” Another one replied as they walked out of hearing radius. Eloeem started slowly crying, and felt like he was drowning in a sea of troubles, already in the start of the year. After the end of the lunch break, Eloeem sat there, inside the locker, holding both hands on the stomach, and looked out some air holes on the locker door, providing him with the air he needed. Eloeem noticed allot of Yoshis walking past the door to the locker, some older than him. He sat back and rested the back to the back wall to the locker, when a Yoshi stopped at the locker door, and said to someone: “I’m coming, I need my Math book first!” Due to the light voice, Eloeem heard it was a girl, and then she began to turn on the Code-lock, and opened the door, getting shocked Eloeem sat inside it, with both he’s hands Clutching the stomach, as if he was in pain. “Why are you in my locker?” she asked, not getting any response from Eloeem, as he walked towards he’s classroom, trying to wipe the remaining tears on he’s face. “Stop! What happened?” She followed Eloeem, and he stopped and turned, looking on the ground. The Yoshi where a green one, a bit tall. She looked at him, and said: “You look all beaten up, what happened?” Her voice was calm and friendly, making Eloeem feel a little bit more happy. He looked up at her eyes, and noticed they where dark-blue, and that she had a blond short hair, striped with a darker brown color. She shacked her head, and took he’s hand, “lets go to the headmaster, he will set those, bullies back in place.” “Please Don’t!” Eloeem said, looking afraid of something “Then it will only get worse…” The Yoshi girl seemed surprised, and replied: “No it won’t, listen,” she kneeled down, getting to Eloeem’s height, “If you want help, then I can give you help now, by going to the headmaster and tell what happened.” She looked a bit annoyed, but still understanding to the situation of Eloeem’s problem. “You don’t see,” Eloeem replied, “If I do it, they will probably just be worse to me on the free time,” Eloeem looked sad, and some tears came visible on he’s cheek, “I.. I need to go now.” he said simply, and put he’s hands in the pockets to the sweatshirt, and walked away from the Yoshi. She simply stood up, and said with one finger in her ear, saying: “The bugs planted, and he didn’t notice… but I sense no evil in him, maybe it’s covered with something, stronger then mine powers, what do you think I should do?” She listened to something and said: “As you wish master.” and took the math book out of the locker, walking the opposite direction of Eloeem.
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Home Sweet Home:
Outside the classroom door, Eloeem stood, looking at he’s watch. “15 minutes late… maybe she wont get to angry…” he Eloeem twisted the handle of the classroom door, and opened it slowly. He felt unwanted in the astonishing silence he walked into, every step, breath, even twist with the head he took, made the perfect silence in the room disturbed. Only him in the class could be heard. The teacher stood up, looking down in a book, while she made a little cross note in it. “I was at the bathroom, sorry if it took a while…” Eloeem said with the weakest of voices, only to be replied by: “Who gave you permission to speak?” from the teacher, with a rather annoyed voice. Eloeem silenced in a instant, shutting the mouth, hard. “Well?…” she asked, waiting for some response. “No one…” Eloeem said with a defeated voice, looking down. “Look at me when I’m talking to you.” she said, not yelling, but angry and annoyed. Eloeem looked back up at her, she looked as mad as ever, but still she managed to keep that low voice. “Yes teacher,” he replied with the weakest of voices, like he was whispering, but still could be heard by all in the class room. “That’s better,” she said simply, and continued with a more serious voice, “Now these fore boys, I’ll not name who, said you where outside the schools limit zone, while you where supposed to be in the cantina. Is this true?” Eloeem didn’t reply, in fear of being beaten by Derek and the gang. “Your silence indicate this must be true, so I’ll be informing the headmaster about this behavior.” She quickly scribbled a note, folded it in the middle, gave it to a girl in the class and said: “Give this to the headmaster, and take this troublemaker with you to.” and took Eloeem in the arm, opened the door, so the girl could get past them, and then pushed Eloeem out the classroom with a small puff, closing the door behind them. The girl was the one wanting to tell her vacation first of all. She turned to Eloeem and said: “Thanks to you I miss the rest of the drawing class,” She looked really annoyed, and had the most angry eyes Eloeem ever had seen in he’s life. He became a bit scared when the girl looked to angry, and backed a bit of, giving a silent “sorry” as a reply to the angry, yet cute Yoshi standing in front of him. “Let’s just get this over with.” she replied and walked fast towards the principal’s office with the sheet of paper in hand. Eloeem couldn’t do anything else than follow, and hope for the best. When they entered the door with the word: “Headmasters Office” on, they was meet by a counter. Behind it sat a lady with the most curries eyes. “What are two adorable kids as yourself doing here?” the counter lady said with a weak voice, “you seeking the Principal?” “Yes!” the girl replied, “This geek was truancy the school,” she said annoyed “And now I have to loose my favorite class because of it.” Eloeem just stood there silent as ever. “Now, now. Not get hasty young lady,” the lady said behind the counter, Writhing something down in a book, “he might got a excuse to all this mess…” Silence filled the room. “Well” She continued “The head is not busy right now, so you may go inside.” The girl and Eloeem walked towards the door to the left of them, with a glass window, with the word: “Principal” on, but it had a small White tint on it, making all of the stuff inside the room looking blurry. They entered, only to get meet by a empty chair, and a still steaming cup of coffee. “Err, is the principal here?” The girl asked. “Sure am” A voice from the back of them said, “I was only on the bathroom a little while, but why have you come?” The principal closed the door behind him as he walked to he’s chair, taking a sip from the coffee he had on the table. The girl placed the paper she had on the table to the principal, and said: “I am here to give you this, and escort this guy to you, Miss Gorgia sent me.” The principal unfolded the paper, and read it, replying: “I see. Well, you can go now.” Both Eloeem and the girl tried to go out when the principal said “Not you, Eloeem. You stay here.” “You’re so screwed,” The girl whispered to Eloeem before walking out the office. “Thanks for the support,” Eloeem thought sarcastic, and remained in the office, waiting for the principal to begin to say something. The principal just sat there, looking at Eloeem with he’s hands folded and bend upwards, so they covered the mouth. “I am most displeased with your action today, mister.” The principal took a little pause before continuing: “And I won’t let your actions influence other students to brake the rules, do you understand?” He got a serious face, and Eloeem replied in shame: “Yes sir.” Eloeem’s head dropped, and tilted to the right. He didn’t want to look the principal in the face. “This is just a warning, and will not be noted to your records, but you’ll have to stay a hour on school in detention because of you being outside of the schools area, while it was lunch.” The principal turned the chair round and looked out a window he had in the back, looking down on the playground, witch was empty for the moment. “You are dismissed.” Eloeem walked out the office, and didn’t care look behind him, and closed he’s eyes tightly, wishing none of this was happening. The rest of the normal school day went on without any further annoying meetings with Derek and he’s gang, yet now Eloeem had to make a excuse to he’s parents about the late arrival home. “1 minute left to go… please release me now!” Eloeem thought while sitting beside a guy, 3 years older than him, picking he’s nose. “How disgusting” Eloeem thought while the older kid ate the snot, and Eloeem quickly looked down at the table, ready to go out of the room, and go home. The teacher having to sit there this detention, was reading a book, and when the time turned three, she simply stood up, and opened the door, letting all the students go home. Eloeem took the backpack on and proceeded out the school. Well out, someone shouted behind him: “Water bomb!!!” Eloeem could turn 90 degrease before he felt something hit the side of he’s head, and then all the rest of that side of the body, feeling wet. “HAHA!! Bulls eye!!” a recognizable voice said, “Yea, you really showed him!” Another said. Eloeem knew who it was before looking at them, and turned the head back, and placed both hands in the pockets. “Now. Don’t cry all day! I can’t take a little GIRL like you cry all day.” Eloeem didn’t say anything to this insult, but kept walking. “Oh, look” another of the group said, “He’s been taking a leech, and is all wet because of it!” All of the group broke out in laughter. Eloeem clutched both hands tightly together in the pockets, wanting to hit them all so badly they couldn’t stand in three weeks, but he knew he was to weak to stand up against fore of the strongest and meanest boys in he’s class. He just kept going, so the gang could grow to tired to bother him anymore, and it worked, but the next day, it would be just as it was this day, maybe even worse if he didn’t pay the (protection money) to Derek. When he was back at home, he came to a house with filled cardboard boxes with all kind of stuff from small electronic devises to finery. Eloeem’s mom came out to the corridor, with a box, filled with Eloeem’s toys and room decorations. “Oh…” She said when she met Eloeem In the corridor, still having he’s backpack on. “We’re moving to Yoshi’s Island.” Eloeem just stood there with a open mouth, and blinked. “I knew you would get surprised, but me and dad decided it today, when you where at school. Dad’s got a new and better job.” Eloeem began to smile, and looked as happy as ever. “I know you’ll miss your classmates and the neighbors here, but this is a most important opportunity for us, you’ll see when the time is right.” “No way I’m going to miss them!” Eloeem thought, trying to realize this really happened. He got so happy, he hugged he’s mother, and all she said was: “Why are you wet?”
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The Trip:
That night, Eloeem had to sleep in a empty room, all he’s things, even the bed, had been disassemble if possible, and then been moved to the car outside, so he was sleeping on a pack of blankets instead. That car where nearly never used, they lived in a little island and a small town. Not as big as a city, but bigger than a village. So the car where nearly never been used to much else then moving heavy shipments from the little harbor to the south, the things Eloeem‘s dad needed to have to keep the weapons store up and going. The Island where called: The little Yoshi’s Island. Eloeem didn’t know the real name of the Island, so he called it that to. This day Eloeem and he’s parents was moving to the real Yoshi’s Island, and then maybe get a new, and better life then they got here. At 5 AM Eloeem’s father came into the room, and woke him up, “Now Eloeem, we go in a few hours” He took the little Yoshi boy up and placed him in a sitting position at the side of the blanket-bed. Eloeem who not yet had the time to get up, was in a state of half wake, half sleep. “Now, are you excited?” he’s father asked. “…” Eloeem was about to fall asleep again, but he’s father shacked him a bit: “Wake up!” Eloeem looked like a Zombie with that state of conches, only saying: “I’m awake, I’m awake…” Eloeem rubbed he’s eyes, trying to get a bit more wake, then stretched as far as he could, while he’s dad helped he’s cloths on. “Now, get some food in that body of yours, so we can go when we shall go…” Eloeem just stood there, repeating blinking he’s eyes, and looked quite sleepy. He’s father gave him a little puff on the back, making Eloeem move towards the kitchen, but slow. “If you do everything that FAST, it would take years to get to Yoshi’s Island!” He’s father said sarcastic, and laughed with a low voice to himself, resuming he’s activities. Eloeem just went to the table without bothering about he‘s fathers little joke, where a big breakfast waited for him: pancakes, two cooked eggs in egg glasses, a big glass with milk. He’s mom came into the kitchen trough the door to the road, and it was all silent, and no one to see either, except the neighbors: a green female and a blue male. All their eggs had no embryo, so they had no kids, but they often babysat Eloeem when Mom or Dad where out on a day of or on a little vacation where it would be to expensive to take Eloeem with them. But Eloeem didn’t care if he didn’t got to get on their vacations, because it was pretty cool to the neighbors to. Eloeem often called them Uncle and Aunt Tuna, because their last name was Tundra. They stood at the entrance and looked into the kitchen at Eloeem. “Now, it was Aunt Tuna who made your breakfast,” said he’s mother, “so then, what’d you say?” She asked Eloeem, “Thank you” Eloeem replied quickly. “That was nothing,” Aunt Tuna said “We can kelp you pack to if you want.” Uncle Tuna replied, looking around in the nearly empty room, still was a lot of cardboard boxes needed to be moved to the car. “That would be very nice of you,” he’s mom said and walked into the corridor, and out of the hearing range to Eloeem, who started eating the nice breakfast he got from he’s neighbors, enjoying it. After a quarter, Eloeem was finished eating, and he’s parents finished packing with the help from Aunt and Uncle Tuna. Eloeem, who was sitting in the car at the moment, while the adherent was attached to the car. He was full of syrup in the face from the pancakes, and he tried to lick it away, as Uncle Tuna came and signaled Eloeem to roll down the window, witch he did, and looked up at the uncle. The pretended uncle, looked at Eloeem for a while, then said: “You have a good trip, ok? Come back soon though, maybe we got a little kid you can baby-sit when you come back to.” Eloeem whom didn’t understand the pain the uncle really where in, not yet was able to get a baby, just nodded and smiled back at him. The uncle smiled to, and took a few steps back, and looked at the old car driving down the road, sighing loudly, hugging he’s Wife, saying to him: “I’ll really miss that kid…” “Yea, me to,” He replied. At the dock, a ferry was docked, already started to board and release cars and people who was on their way to Yoshi’s Island, though that wasn’t much: three cars and 21 people including Eloeem and he’s parents. It was a really old ferry, owned by the Sky Guy Company Of Travel. Or S-G-COT for short. The ferry was made of three, but really stable due to the unique design. They boarded and was on their way. Eloeem was complete silent, but had a little smile on he’s face, what was rare for him. He’s parents talked about how the new home would be, and how awesome the new school should be, and how he was going to get new friends. Eloeem really didn’t pay attention, he was in he’s own mind and didn’t notice how long time the ferry trip really was. At the dock to Yoshi’s Island, there was two miles to Yoshi’s City, that was a bit longer into the Island. So they had to drive a bit to get to the new home. “Are you excited Eloeem?” He’s mom asked, looking at him with a grin on the face. Eloeem just nodded and looked out the car’s window, not caring for anything else than how the new house would look like. “I guess he are” She then whispered to Eloeem’s father. He simply nodded and looked happy to. “Dad?” Eloeem asked curious, “Yes?” He’s dad replied, “What is it?” “I just wondered…” Eloeem began, “How dues the house look like?” “Well you see” dad replied and turned he’s head to Eloeem, “It’s Huge, and you can-” “Watch Out!!” Eloeem’s mother shouted before Eloeem could hear a huge sound, and all went black.
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Whew... ^^ well these are the latest chapters, I'm working on the next chapter this momente, but got a momentearly Wrighters Block >.>;;;
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