Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Jun 17, 2006 17:05:08 GMT -5
a story about my characters named L.D. and Zell. I know the title sucks, I was out of ideas though >_> <_<.
Chapter 1: mission report
Has any one ever told you of the Mushroom Kingdom? Chances are, yes you have. My name is L.D. Ryoko, I am a royal dragoon for the Mushroom Kingdom and assistaint for the Mario brothers. This is my story. It was a peaceful day in the mushroom Kingdom as the koopa's haven't attacked in a long time. "You know, it makes me wonder what goes through ol' Bowsers mind anyway", I said talking to my friend, Zell Dio, a dry bones.
"I know, back then he just attacked without breaks. It's been a year since he last attacked us." said Zell, who had that look in his yellow eyes that just screamed "somethings wrong".
"Zell, L.D., you're wanted by Peach",said a gruff looking toad.
"Geez, Marx, don't go jumping out of no where. Thats my job!", exclaimed Zell as we both got up to leave.
"You still don't change do you Zell",Marx sighed.
"Perfectionalism is the essence of the female mind, Zell always tells me. This was appearent as we stepped into the throne room which was clean as usual and there was Ella, Mia, and Lori cleaning just about every square inch of the room. Peach's cleaning maids love to kill all joy involving dirt and mud with their annoying, " must clean every nook and cranny attitude". Ella the 45 year old, blond toad with orange spots on her head and had a bad habit of spraying every dirty thing in sight and kicking the soilders and guards out when they get filthy from a battle. Mia is a 16 year old, blue haired koopa with a an icy blue shell who is favored better by the guards because she makes a wonder full healer and will let emergancy messes(think bloodied soliders or vomiting from sickness as the nearest bathroom is a good distance away from the gates and bedrooms) slide. Lori is a 21 year old, black haired, orange yoshi who loves music and attacking any of the guards with her hammer if they tick her off. Peach and the Mario brothers were in the middle of the room. Mario is a man who is short, fat, and wore a red shirt and cap with blue overalls. Luigi is mario's twin brother who is tall, slim, and wore green instead of Mario's red shirt and cap. Peach was a tall lady(about as tall as luigi) and wore her pink dress with the blue gem in the center and suprisingly she wasn't wearing her crown.
"You called", said Zell.
"Bowser up to something",I said.
"Yes, unfortunetly", was the the princess' reply.
"Oh, and what are these kill joys here for", I said
"The 'kill joys' are here to help you with a mission",said Peach. The trio looked proud of what the princess had said, but Zell, the bros., Marx(who walked in when Peach replied about the "kill joys"), and I just dropped our jaws(Zell quite literally dropped his jaw).
"WHAT!", Marx yelled, "You can't be serious, why not any of the girls who helped Mario against the Shadow queen or Bowser! These girls only clean and get on others nerves" Mia and Lori just looked sad at this statment, but as usual,nothing hurts Ella. Ella threw her bucket of water on Marx in reply to his comment.
"True, but none of them have healing abilities and this mission is extra dangerous", Peach said.
"Mia is the only one I've seen with healing spells,I've never seen Lori or Ella in action", I said, "This mission will be dangerous for them too".
"The girls would probably just clean the enemies to death", Zell said laughing.
"Big-a deal,lets-a see if they-a have some worth",said Mario
"Mario's right,besides we can get rid of them if they don't prove their worth",assented Luigi.
"Right,let's hear that Mission Peach",I said. Peach's mission was something one wouldn't suspect. our job was to infiltrait the koopa castle and find out whats going on. After the mesage the eight of us left to the mountains in the west to Bowsers castle.
comments? critique?
Chapter 1: mission report
Has any one ever told you of the Mushroom Kingdom? Chances are, yes you have. My name is L.D. Ryoko, I am a royal dragoon for the Mushroom Kingdom and assistaint for the Mario brothers. This is my story. It was a peaceful day in the mushroom Kingdom as the koopa's haven't attacked in a long time. "You know, it makes me wonder what goes through ol' Bowsers mind anyway", I said talking to my friend, Zell Dio, a dry bones.
"I know, back then he just attacked without breaks. It's been a year since he last attacked us." said Zell, who had that look in his yellow eyes that just screamed "somethings wrong".
"Zell, L.D., you're wanted by Peach",said a gruff looking toad.
"Geez, Marx, don't go jumping out of no where. Thats my job!", exclaimed Zell as we both got up to leave.
"You still don't change do you Zell",Marx sighed.
"Perfectionalism is the essence of the female mind, Zell always tells me. This was appearent as we stepped into the throne room which was clean as usual and there was Ella, Mia, and Lori cleaning just about every square inch of the room. Peach's cleaning maids love to kill all joy involving dirt and mud with their annoying, " must clean every nook and cranny attitude". Ella the 45 year old, blond toad with orange spots on her head and had a bad habit of spraying every dirty thing in sight and kicking the soilders and guards out when they get filthy from a battle. Mia is a 16 year old, blue haired koopa with a an icy blue shell who is favored better by the guards because she makes a wonder full healer and will let emergancy messes(think bloodied soliders or vomiting from sickness as the nearest bathroom is a good distance away from the gates and bedrooms) slide. Lori is a 21 year old, black haired, orange yoshi who loves music and attacking any of the guards with her hammer if they tick her off. Peach and the Mario brothers were in the middle of the room. Mario is a man who is short, fat, and wore a red shirt and cap with blue overalls. Luigi is mario's twin brother who is tall, slim, and wore green instead of Mario's red shirt and cap. Peach was a tall lady(about as tall as luigi) and wore her pink dress with the blue gem in the center and suprisingly she wasn't wearing her crown.
"You called", said Zell.
"Bowser up to something",I said.
"Yes, unfortunetly", was the the princess' reply.
"Oh, and what are these kill joys here for", I said
"The 'kill joys' are here to help you with a mission",said Peach. The trio looked proud of what the princess had said, but Zell, the bros., Marx(who walked in when Peach replied about the "kill joys"), and I just dropped our jaws(Zell quite literally dropped his jaw).
"WHAT!", Marx yelled, "You can't be serious, why not any of the girls who helped Mario against the Shadow queen or Bowser! These girls only clean and get on others nerves" Mia and Lori just looked sad at this statment, but as usual,nothing hurts Ella. Ella threw her bucket of water on Marx in reply to his comment.
"True, but none of them have healing abilities and this mission is extra dangerous", Peach said.
"Mia is the only one I've seen with healing spells,I've never seen Lori or Ella in action", I said, "This mission will be dangerous for them too".
"The girls would probably just clean the enemies to death", Zell said laughing.
"Big-a deal,lets-a see if they-a have some worth",said Mario
"Mario's right,besides we can get rid of them if they don't prove their worth",assented Luigi.
"Right,let's hear that Mission Peach",I said. Peach's mission was something one wouldn't suspect. our job was to infiltrait the koopa castle and find out whats going on. After the mesage the eight of us left to the mountains in the west to Bowsers castle.
comments? critique?
