Post by ABYAY on Sept 4, 2006 0:08:57 GMT -5
I've posted this on YA in like 6-8 chapter sizes, but I'll do 4 each here. The 1st series of this story has nothing much to do with 2 or 3. #2 is where my yoshi Atomic Black Yoshi (ABY) meets his sister Angel Yoshi (AY). Those two are in my sig as userbars. Tsunami Yoshi (TY) is my avvy. Anyway, here we go.
yeah I'm placing my biggest story made on here in parts. It's not yet completed, but I'll update it every few days. Well, here goes!
Atomo World Disaster 3: Return to Homeland
Chapter 1:
At the end of Atomo World Disaster 2, ABY (Atomic Black Yoshi) figured out that AY (Angel Yoshi) is his sister from a different planet. He also knows that he was sent away from the planet due to his power. Angered, he's determined to go back to his homeland and seek revenge on the king. Little is known about him as all ABY knows is that he's the one who sent him away. Here is his side of the story:
"The day I was told about AY being my sister, that made me happy. I was the opposite when I was told that I was sent away just for my power! I mean, why just rid a person from their planet just for having a certain ability!? Well soon enough, the king will die as tomorrow, I set foot back on the planet in which I have no clue what the name of it was!"
AY also knew the story, but wished not to tell him until the time was right. Here is her story.
"I knew ABY would be happy when I told him I was his sister. However, I had to tell him about our homeland. I thought he wouldn't care as much as he did. Now he's determined and won't stop for anything. I know he can't get there alone, so I'm sure what he's going to say..."
Through the whole story, ABY and the other main characters will tell the story. This way it will tell the story in more detail than the usual way.
Why be named Atomo World Disaster? Well, It goes along with the series and may end it. But, I'm not sure.
Chapter 2:
Today was the day that I would finally get the revenge I have been seeking. Even though it has only been one day after the story, I would instantly get to my goal and stop for nothing.
"ABY, are you ready to go?" I hear AY not far away as she is prepared. I reply with a simple yes, and then we set off to what we call Homeland.
Of course, doing this would be simple. The other world isn't far away as this world and Homeland use each others' gravity to revolve around each other. In fact, they're so close together, the air density stays heavy enough for us to pass through. We would never try something this crazy if the worlds were far apart. As we go up, we wave good-bye to Chamelion Yoshi (CY), VolcanoYoshi (VY), Seismic Yoshi (SY), Tsunami Yoshi (TY), and ElectroYoshi (EY). There is no turning back as if we just set sail on ship with no destination point.
Along the way, AY and I get in a long conversation to make the time pass. She doesn't look like a sister of mine, but she really is. I think we're closer than a family relationship, as we do everything together and have little disagreement with each other.
"How long have you known that you were my sister?" I asked that in a curious manner. Her response was simple and easy.
"I've known since the beginning of my life."
"Then why can't I remember it?"
"I was there during the day of your sending away. You were shot with a strange beam. I was sure it was designed to disrupt your memory."
I just can't believe people on that planet were so harsh to me. AY's responses were just unbelievable and exact. She has a wonderful memory. She begins to ask me questions now.
"Do you remember what you did on Atomo World?"
I replied in a simple manner. "That beam messed up my memory. I don't remember anything until the planet was named after me."
"Was that your happiest moment in your belief?"
"I'm not sure. There were so many happy moments down there. However, my happiest moment would now probably be when you came down. It shows how much you cared that I was safe."
About 30 minutes of non-stop flying, we begin to switch atmospheres. I can't believe I'm actually getting control of Homeland back from all the people that treat it like a mouse in a house. All of this wouldn't be successful, not even known about if AY wasn't here. She's my source of information, and I'm her source of power and information that she needs. We are the ultimate alliance in anything we do. You'll never see up not working together. We can even fuse to make the almighty Ania Yoshi. However, it's stressful on us as our souls are mixed together, creating a pressuring feeling, and we only do this when we must. It makes it more fun when we're fighting side-by-side. Sometimes, I wish I didn't aquire my precious fighting skills and just lived a simple life of a regular yoshi on Yoshi's Island. However, my atomic abilities, I always want them. They will never leave me.
Finally, we begin to see the visual land of Homeland. Too bad there's snow all over the place. I asked AY something I wouldn't expect to say.
"Homeland has seasons?" She replies with an unexpected answer.
"Not that I know of. There might be, but as long as I've been there, we didn't."
I became curious after hearing that as my nerves stiffened as I began to worry. If not part of a season, I have a feeling that something is going on. At last, we set foot on the cold, snowy ground. This is when my journey begins.
Chapter 3:
AY and I have set foot on Homeland in the cold snow, which is unusual due to AY's beliefs when she was young and lived here. The weather isn't kicking up right now, as things are calm, yet cold. I may live through this easily, as my atomic energy circulates in me and it keeps me warm. I can already see that the snow melts under my feet. However, I'm not sure about AY though. She only has the ability to fire a purple beam with lightning, and that doesn't sound like something that'll keep her warm in this freezing weather. I am very worried about it too. If she were to pass away from me, not only would I be in a depression not just for her dying, but for me bringing her here under unfavorable conditions. She looks like she can do it though. She's one tough girl. AY is the first to speak to me.
"It sure is cold here." I should've expected a sentence like that.
"I know. Think you can handle it?"
"Oh sure! Just like you, heat cycles through me in the form of electricity."
Well, that answered my long statement. We explore for a short time while the weather is calm. The snow melts under my feet for each step I take. It seems we landed in a spot where nothing lives. Nothing can be seen for miles and miles. Could this be the reason why nobody lives here? I get that idea, tell it to AY, and we go for another flight over the barren snow desert. About ten minutes later, the weather picks up, making it hard for AY to fly. I don't want to pressure her, so I request for her to land and continue on foot. She agrees and we well, continue on foot, just like I said. Another problem begins to happen soon. The snowfall increases and the winds pick up to gale winds, the ones that blow up to 40 mph or so. We then get the idea that the wind only blows in one direction. I was sure AY wouldn't agree to this.
"With winds this strong, it'll carry us with it. If you begin to fly with the wind, it'll keep you warmer and we'll move faster." AY responded instantly.
"That sounds crazy, but it might work. Let's do it!"
Well, she agreed!I get on her back, and we take flight. The winds pick up even more, making the flight quicker. Although tough to control, AY manages to keep herself steady. We were going about 45 mph until the winds began to calm. This is when we finally saw activity from yoshies. We knew that we were close to where we could find the world's name, information, and the why the snow desert was there. We descend and we advance into the small village.
As we advance, we see that the village is small, but wealthy. Many yoshies are walking around. I myself was shocked to see that a village this small would be so rich. As I advance in, one yoshi sees me and greets AY and I into the village.
"Welcome visitors! This is the perfect... wait, you're, you can't be! IT'S ATOMIC BLACK YOSHI! RUN!"
Everyone hears his alert and look at me while I still appear to be confused. When they know it's me, they run in terror. I try to calm them, but they're too frightened. AY then speaks up.
"Listen everyone! ABY here is a changed person. I've known him for a long while." Another yoshi seems curious as she advances closer to AY.
"You're Angel Yoshi!" AY calmly responds.
"Yes I am. ABY here isn't going to harm anyone. We used to live here together. Obviously, you've forgot who we were.
"Yes I have! You're a legend of Yoshi's World!
Yoshi's World? I would suppose that's the name of this world. I guess this is an expansion to the name of Yoshi's Island. The little girl yoshi speaks to me next.
"You're ABY, the Banished One?"
Banished one? Why wouldn't she be afraid of me?
"The Banished One?
"Yes, but I don't believe that. You're not causing destruction. I'll relieve the other yoshies."
I hear her yell out in a loud voice about me not being a threat, and everyone calms. Now I feel accepted and enter the village. Some of the yoshies apoligize for their freakish behavior. One of the yoshies begin to speak to me.
"I hear that you are a great fighter ABY. There has been an unknown yoshi not far from here, causing these massive snowstorms. We have no protection from the cold like you. I remember you because I tested on you when you were little. You were resistant to bizarre conditions, making you a very good fighter. However, the people here feared your atomic power, and with an overwhelming vote, we decided to banish you, but first, we drained your memory, making you think you were never here."
His small story had touched me. I had to know more.
"Did you find any weaknesses about me?"
"Actually, we didn't, making you practically resistant to most elemental attacks. You'd be the perfect weapon for that yoshi making the snowstorms. However, don't think you're invincible. Remember that atomic energy doesn't last forever.
"I'll only die of that when I actually die. However, it's not that time yet."
"All I can say is good luck ABY. You'll be safe in this village until we can inform that you aren't a threat at all."
I prepared my trip back into the snow desert, asking AY for assistance along the way. May my first mission begin.
Chapter 4:
Being assigned to my first mission, I knew it would be a simple one. All I had to do was simply defeat or compromise with the yoshi that I have no clue of. I don't know if it's a he or she, what he or she does, or his or her abilities. Of course, AY would be my companion on this. So, we go flying off into the snow desert. We could tell that the winds were picking up. I knew this would be rough on AY, but she insisted we kept flying. I hate to cause arguments, and I don't like controlling other people's lives. So, we kept flying. AY seemed upset about something, but I decided to keep it quiet and away from it. The winds greatly increase, and AY struggles to keep moving forward. She dives down at intense speeds, almost throwing me off. In an attempt to increase her speeds, it succeeds, and we come to a stop short after a burst of speed. She appears to be tired, so we stop. I begin to conversize with her until she regains her strength.
"This weather is just insane. When we move one way, it changes."
"I know. It's crazy."
"Are you feeling alright?"
"Yes, I'm fine. I just have a feeling about this yoshi, as if I have met it before."
"Really? I thought we were the only two. Well, you being the only one since I was banished.
"Well, who knows. Let's just keep going. I'm all rested up, and I'm ready for some action on this planet."
We then continue further into the snow desert while the wind is calm. While we're flying, ice begins to fall. They start as small as a bit of dust, then start to be as large as small rocks. Obviously, we have main protection against the elements of nature, but physical parts of nature that are solid, I don't think we have much of a resistance. We start to get pelted with small hailstones, but that doesn't affect us much, at least, until the wind picks up. The ice feels much harder, and it begins to really affect us. AY descends as we take cover. Wait, there is no cover in the desert. It's a snow desert dang it! Well, we hide our more vulnerable bodyparts, while exposing other resistant parts, like me, my back and skull, AY shields herself with her wings, which hold out excellent. Seeing this, I gather by AY, seeing that her wings are big enough. Finally, the hailstones stop. AY's wings are in pain, but still useable. However, I request her to not use them now. That would just cause suffering. She quietly agrees and we move on. Thankfully, the harsh weather here is silent in the current moment. It feels like an eye of a hurricane. However, nothing seems to returning.
It wasn't going to be long until AY's wings healed. She says that they're feeling better and she was ready to fly. I went with her, and we're in the air again. Everything was going smoothly until a strange storm appeared. It dropped snowflakes the size of baseballs and released ice in the form of lightning. The storm was intense. Now I know why nobody ever lived in the snow desert. We were doing fine until one of the ice bolts struck AY's wing, freezing it solid. Unable to flap it, she began to fall, with me on her back. I had to think of something fast as if we didn't, this would be over soon. I soon got an idea. I told AY it might hurt, but anything would have to do. I fired an atomic beam at the ice, melting it. Soon, the ice melted and became unattached, and we evened out the fall. AY became nervous, so we decided to land once again. The snow on the ground increased dramatically, causing massive problems for me. Since my body circulates atomic energy, the snow quickly melts beneath me, making it hard to walk. However, I keep pressing on. The snow has already reached a foot in height on the ground. AY easily maneuvers this catastrophic condition but simply flying just over the ground. I didn't think I was going to make it much further until the snow stops. Even though the snow remained hard to travel through, I was still happy it stopped. However, I learned different when I saw an icy beam hit AY in the chest, freezing her solid. I look back, surprised by what I see.
My search for my first mission was over; find the yoshi of the snow desert. Now, it's time to attempt to compromise.
"You freeze my friend, I kill you. It works like that." I realized it's another girl yoshi with no wings, and before she can react, I turn around and fire an atomic beam at AY, melting her again. She is relieved. Realizing who did it, she yells out in surprise.
"It's you! You're Blizzard Yoshi! I can't believe I didn't see it before." She responds back.
"That's because you're losing your mind with the Banished One here. I didn't expect you to make a foolish mistake and help someone who was banished! You're not a wise one.
"Hey! ABY is my brother! Don't you... Augh! DIE!"
I never saw AY with a temper like that. She amazed me as she shot an electrical beam at Blizzard Yoshi (BY). Although she evaded, I knew AY would be relentless as she had enough energy to transform herself into Dark AY. I knew this would be a match to watch, only to join in if AY needed it.
yeah I'm placing my biggest story made on here in parts. It's not yet completed, but I'll update it every few days. Well, here goes!
Atomo World Disaster 3: Return to Homeland
Chapter 1:
At the end of Atomo World Disaster 2, ABY (Atomic Black Yoshi) figured out that AY (Angel Yoshi) is his sister from a different planet. He also knows that he was sent away from the planet due to his power. Angered, he's determined to go back to his homeland and seek revenge on the king. Little is known about him as all ABY knows is that he's the one who sent him away. Here is his side of the story:
"The day I was told about AY being my sister, that made me happy. I was the opposite when I was told that I was sent away just for my power! I mean, why just rid a person from their planet just for having a certain ability!? Well soon enough, the king will die as tomorrow, I set foot back on the planet in which I have no clue what the name of it was!"
AY also knew the story, but wished not to tell him until the time was right. Here is her story.
"I knew ABY would be happy when I told him I was his sister. However, I had to tell him about our homeland. I thought he wouldn't care as much as he did. Now he's determined and won't stop for anything. I know he can't get there alone, so I'm sure what he's going to say..."
Through the whole story, ABY and the other main characters will tell the story. This way it will tell the story in more detail than the usual way.
Why be named Atomo World Disaster? Well, It goes along with the series and may end it. But, I'm not sure.
Chapter 2:
Today was the day that I would finally get the revenge I have been seeking. Even though it has only been one day after the story, I would instantly get to my goal and stop for nothing.
"ABY, are you ready to go?" I hear AY not far away as she is prepared. I reply with a simple yes, and then we set off to what we call Homeland.
Of course, doing this would be simple. The other world isn't far away as this world and Homeland use each others' gravity to revolve around each other. In fact, they're so close together, the air density stays heavy enough for us to pass through. We would never try something this crazy if the worlds were far apart. As we go up, we wave good-bye to Chamelion Yoshi (CY), VolcanoYoshi (VY), Seismic Yoshi (SY), Tsunami Yoshi (TY), and ElectroYoshi (EY). There is no turning back as if we just set sail on ship with no destination point.
Along the way, AY and I get in a long conversation to make the time pass. She doesn't look like a sister of mine, but she really is. I think we're closer than a family relationship, as we do everything together and have little disagreement with each other.
"How long have you known that you were my sister?" I asked that in a curious manner. Her response was simple and easy.
"I've known since the beginning of my life."
"Then why can't I remember it?"
"I was there during the day of your sending away. You were shot with a strange beam. I was sure it was designed to disrupt your memory."
I just can't believe people on that planet were so harsh to me. AY's responses were just unbelievable and exact. She has a wonderful memory. She begins to ask me questions now.
"Do you remember what you did on Atomo World?"
I replied in a simple manner. "That beam messed up my memory. I don't remember anything until the planet was named after me."
"Was that your happiest moment in your belief?"
"I'm not sure. There were so many happy moments down there. However, my happiest moment would now probably be when you came down. It shows how much you cared that I was safe."
About 30 minutes of non-stop flying, we begin to switch atmospheres. I can't believe I'm actually getting control of Homeland back from all the people that treat it like a mouse in a house. All of this wouldn't be successful, not even known about if AY wasn't here. She's my source of information, and I'm her source of power and information that she needs. We are the ultimate alliance in anything we do. You'll never see up not working together. We can even fuse to make the almighty Ania Yoshi. However, it's stressful on us as our souls are mixed together, creating a pressuring feeling, and we only do this when we must. It makes it more fun when we're fighting side-by-side. Sometimes, I wish I didn't aquire my precious fighting skills and just lived a simple life of a regular yoshi on Yoshi's Island. However, my atomic abilities, I always want them. They will never leave me.
Finally, we begin to see the visual land of Homeland. Too bad there's snow all over the place. I asked AY something I wouldn't expect to say.
"Homeland has seasons?" She replies with an unexpected answer.
"Not that I know of. There might be, but as long as I've been there, we didn't."
I became curious after hearing that as my nerves stiffened as I began to worry. If not part of a season, I have a feeling that something is going on. At last, we set foot on the cold, snowy ground. This is when my journey begins.
Chapter 3:
AY and I have set foot on Homeland in the cold snow, which is unusual due to AY's beliefs when she was young and lived here. The weather isn't kicking up right now, as things are calm, yet cold. I may live through this easily, as my atomic energy circulates in me and it keeps me warm. I can already see that the snow melts under my feet. However, I'm not sure about AY though. She only has the ability to fire a purple beam with lightning, and that doesn't sound like something that'll keep her warm in this freezing weather. I am very worried about it too. If she were to pass away from me, not only would I be in a depression not just for her dying, but for me bringing her here under unfavorable conditions. She looks like she can do it though. She's one tough girl. AY is the first to speak to me.
"It sure is cold here." I should've expected a sentence like that.
"I know. Think you can handle it?"
"Oh sure! Just like you, heat cycles through me in the form of electricity."
Well, that answered my long statement. We explore for a short time while the weather is calm. The snow melts under my feet for each step I take. It seems we landed in a spot where nothing lives. Nothing can be seen for miles and miles. Could this be the reason why nobody lives here? I get that idea, tell it to AY, and we go for another flight over the barren snow desert. About ten minutes later, the weather picks up, making it hard for AY to fly. I don't want to pressure her, so I request for her to land and continue on foot. She agrees and we well, continue on foot, just like I said. Another problem begins to happen soon. The snowfall increases and the winds pick up to gale winds, the ones that blow up to 40 mph or so. We then get the idea that the wind only blows in one direction. I was sure AY wouldn't agree to this.
"With winds this strong, it'll carry us with it. If you begin to fly with the wind, it'll keep you warmer and we'll move faster." AY responded instantly.
"That sounds crazy, but it might work. Let's do it!"
Well, she agreed!I get on her back, and we take flight. The winds pick up even more, making the flight quicker. Although tough to control, AY manages to keep herself steady. We were going about 45 mph until the winds began to calm. This is when we finally saw activity from yoshies. We knew that we were close to where we could find the world's name, information, and the why the snow desert was there. We descend and we advance into the small village.
As we advance, we see that the village is small, but wealthy. Many yoshies are walking around. I myself was shocked to see that a village this small would be so rich. As I advance in, one yoshi sees me and greets AY and I into the village.
"Welcome visitors! This is the perfect... wait, you're, you can't be! IT'S ATOMIC BLACK YOSHI! RUN!"
Everyone hears his alert and look at me while I still appear to be confused. When they know it's me, they run in terror. I try to calm them, but they're too frightened. AY then speaks up.
"Listen everyone! ABY here is a changed person. I've known him for a long while." Another yoshi seems curious as she advances closer to AY.
"You're Angel Yoshi!" AY calmly responds.
"Yes I am. ABY here isn't going to harm anyone. We used to live here together. Obviously, you've forgot who we were.
"Yes I have! You're a legend of Yoshi's World!
Yoshi's World? I would suppose that's the name of this world. I guess this is an expansion to the name of Yoshi's Island. The little girl yoshi speaks to me next.
"You're ABY, the Banished One?"
Banished one? Why wouldn't she be afraid of me?
"The Banished One?
"Yes, but I don't believe that. You're not causing destruction. I'll relieve the other yoshies."
I hear her yell out in a loud voice about me not being a threat, and everyone calms. Now I feel accepted and enter the village. Some of the yoshies apoligize for their freakish behavior. One of the yoshies begin to speak to me.
"I hear that you are a great fighter ABY. There has been an unknown yoshi not far from here, causing these massive snowstorms. We have no protection from the cold like you. I remember you because I tested on you when you were little. You were resistant to bizarre conditions, making you a very good fighter. However, the people here feared your atomic power, and with an overwhelming vote, we decided to banish you, but first, we drained your memory, making you think you were never here."
His small story had touched me. I had to know more.
"Did you find any weaknesses about me?"
"Actually, we didn't, making you practically resistant to most elemental attacks. You'd be the perfect weapon for that yoshi making the snowstorms. However, don't think you're invincible. Remember that atomic energy doesn't last forever.
"I'll only die of that when I actually die. However, it's not that time yet."
"All I can say is good luck ABY. You'll be safe in this village until we can inform that you aren't a threat at all."
I prepared my trip back into the snow desert, asking AY for assistance along the way. May my first mission begin.
Chapter 4:
Being assigned to my first mission, I knew it would be a simple one. All I had to do was simply defeat or compromise with the yoshi that I have no clue of. I don't know if it's a he or she, what he or she does, or his or her abilities. Of course, AY would be my companion on this. So, we go flying off into the snow desert. We could tell that the winds were picking up. I knew this would be rough on AY, but she insisted we kept flying. I hate to cause arguments, and I don't like controlling other people's lives. So, we kept flying. AY seemed upset about something, but I decided to keep it quiet and away from it. The winds greatly increase, and AY struggles to keep moving forward. She dives down at intense speeds, almost throwing me off. In an attempt to increase her speeds, it succeeds, and we come to a stop short after a burst of speed. She appears to be tired, so we stop. I begin to conversize with her until she regains her strength.
"This weather is just insane. When we move one way, it changes."
"I know. It's crazy."
"Are you feeling alright?"
"Yes, I'm fine. I just have a feeling about this yoshi, as if I have met it before."
"Really? I thought we were the only two. Well, you being the only one since I was banished.
"Well, who knows. Let's just keep going. I'm all rested up, and I'm ready for some action on this planet."
We then continue further into the snow desert while the wind is calm. While we're flying, ice begins to fall. They start as small as a bit of dust, then start to be as large as small rocks. Obviously, we have main protection against the elements of nature, but physical parts of nature that are solid, I don't think we have much of a resistance. We start to get pelted with small hailstones, but that doesn't affect us much, at least, until the wind picks up. The ice feels much harder, and it begins to really affect us. AY descends as we take cover. Wait, there is no cover in the desert. It's a snow desert dang it! Well, we hide our more vulnerable bodyparts, while exposing other resistant parts, like me, my back and skull, AY shields herself with her wings, which hold out excellent. Seeing this, I gather by AY, seeing that her wings are big enough. Finally, the hailstones stop. AY's wings are in pain, but still useable. However, I request her to not use them now. That would just cause suffering. She quietly agrees and we move on. Thankfully, the harsh weather here is silent in the current moment. It feels like an eye of a hurricane. However, nothing seems to returning.
It wasn't going to be long until AY's wings healed. She says that they're feeling better and she was ready to fly. I went with her, and we're in the air again. Everything was going smoothly until a strange storm appeared. It dropped snowflakes the size of baseballs and released ice in the form of lightning. The storm was intense. Now I know why nobody ever lived in the snow desert. We were doing fine until one of the ice bolts struck AY's wing, freezing it solid. Unable to flap it, she began to fall, with me on her back. I had to think of something fast as if we didn't, this would be over soon. I soon got an idea. I told AY it might hurt, but anything would have to do. I fired an atomic beam at the ice, melting it. Soon, the ice melted and became unattached, and we evened out the fall. AY became nervous, so we decided to land once again. The snow on the ground increased dramatically, causing massive problems for me. Since my body circulates atomic energy, the snow quickly melts beneath me, making it hard to walk. However, I keep pressing on. The snow has already reached a foot in height on the ground. AY easily maneuvers this catastrophic condition but simply flying just over the ground. I didn't think I was going to make it much further until the snow stops. Even though the snow remained hard to travel through, I was still happy it stopped. However, I learned different when I saw an icy beam hit AY in the chest, freezing her solid. I look back, surprised by what I see.
My search for my first mission was over; find the yoshi of the snow desert. Now, it's time to attempt to compromise.
"You freeze my friend, I kill you. It works like that." I realized it's another girl yoshi with no wings, and before she can react, I turn around and fire an atomic beam at AY, melting her again. She is relieved. Realizing who did it, she yells out in surprise.
"It's you! You're Blizzard Yoshi! I can't believe I didn't see it before." She responds back.
"That's because you're losing your mind with the Banished One here. I didn't expect you to make a foolish mistake and help someone who was banished! You're not a wise one.
"Hey! ABY is my brother! Don't you... Augh! DIE!"
I never saw AY with a temper like that. She amazed me as she shot an electrical beam at Blizzard Yoshi (BY). Although she evaded, I knew AY would be relentless as she had enough energy to transform herself into Dark AY. I knew this would be a match to watch, only to join in if AY needed it.
