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Post by red.yoshi on May 3, 2008 16:19:39 GMT -5
Nice to see you again Zuna! Yes, you have shortened it quite a bit in the most recent chapters o,o. Great work though, and I hope there's still more to come!
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Post by zuna on May 3, 2008 17:24:34 GMT -5
Nice to see ya again, too. I've been taking a LONG time, so, I had to speed it up as soon as possible. The final chapter. I don't know how long chapter eighteen'll be. but if it's really long, I'll just have to split it into two parts.
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Post by zuna on May 3, 2008 18:30:46 GMT -5
Here's chapter eighteen!
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Chapter eighteen
Once the four sarted the battle, anna looked at each shard, confused. They looked like a bunch of puzzle pieces, except for the final one, with was shaped like a circle. After a while of trying to put the pieces together, she frowned. "I can't do this.." She said. she never tried to put a puzzle together before.
"Just try to put it together.." kendra mumbled. she got owned by telekinesis. Why? she was thrown into the dark alley behind the Inn.
"That's gotta hurt.." Crystal frowned. "Anna, hurry up!" She yeled.
"I'm trying!" Anna tried up hurry up with the shards. half an Hour passed by, and she was almost done. All she needed was the clock, and she was done. She looked around, and couldn't find it.
"Where is it?!" Anna panicked, until she saw Sarmad holding it.
"Give it back.." She growled, her hands bursting into flames.
"Not a chance..." Sarmad backed away and smiled, dispite the fact he got scared because Anna's hands caught fire.
When Kendra came back, she said "Anna, you're gonna need this.." She waited until the flames died out beore giving her the spellbook. "I'm still suffering pain from being owned."
"Uh.. Okay?" Once Kendra had walked away, she flipped the pages, and smiled.
"she's gonna do the Time spell.." Kendra muttered. then, she yelled "Whatever you do, don't use the time spell!"
"Crud.." Anna muttered. She loked through a few more pages and stopped. She looked at both Zuna and Sarmad before smiling. She uttered a few words (To tell the truth, I don't know what the heck it was. All I know is that it's part of a spell.) before throwing the book behind her.
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That's the end of part 1.. Oh, and the time spell, it rewinds time back to the very day that someone finds the prognosticus. They won't know what the heck happened, so it's like they're repeating everything. I can't tell you what spell she's using now. xD
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Post by zuna on May 4, 2008 4:09:19 GMT -5
Here's part two of chaper eighteen! ----- Part two of chapter eighteen "I'm afraid of the Time clock destroying the red void- What the heck am I saying?!" Zuna yelled. "I-" Sarmad began, but snapped out of it before frowning. "Oh crud. I can't believe I almost said it out loud." he threw the clock at Anna without knowing it. Anna grabbed it and finally put it in with the other pieces. All five of them watched as the Time clock flew ino the red void. They watched the void shrink, until it disappeared. "I'll get my revenge on all of you soon enough--" Zuna began, but fainted, due to the fact Crystal had electrocuted her. "hurry. lets split before she wakes up!" She said before running off in one direction. "by the way, what was it that you were gonna say earlier?" Anna seemed pretty confused. "Well.. I'm really afraid of having to pick a side, and.." Sarmad began, but whispered the las part quietly to Anna, who blushed. They heard Zuna moan, and they ran off. "by the way, what happened to the prognosticus?" Anna asked. "I don't know. It just disppeared mysteriously." Sarmad said. ----- Soon after.. "Sis? are you taking a coffee break again?" Zuna heard someone say. she was still too tired to get up. She recognized that voice, and knew the girl was just joking. she was being dragged away, and at the same time complained "Will you stop joking for once please? This is starting to get annoying." "... Whatever." ----- That's the end of my fanfic. Aw.. Sarmad likes Anna.. xD *brick'd*  ow.. |
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Post by red.yoshi on May 4, 2008 12:47:56 GMT -5
I like romance =D. I was thinking about writing one myself!
Excellent job well done on this Zuna! I don't want to stop reading! It was very humorous too. Great work!
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Post by zuna on May 4, 2008 13:10:04 GMT -5
I feel sorry for Kendra, though. I'll go fix the typos. i type very fast, so I make a lot of them. Coffee break. I don't know why I typed that. xD
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