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Post by Sky on Apr 20, 2005 1:53:32 GMT -5
This was dedicated to someone, whom I don't know if that person wishes of me to say who exactly it is, but anyhow, here it is.
Oh, and there's one small small word that might make people cringe, and I'm ready to suffer the consequences for it, but this poem is something that gives off (or tries to) a strong feeling, so yeah.... heh.
EDIT: Oh right, word filter... hehe, well you can guess where it doesn't rhyme what I meant.
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Some people on this planet, I fail to understand fully, not even just a portion, How can they live without regret, You know, one of us humans' basic emotion.
They enjoy making others miserable, Sometimes taking it as humor, I find this behavior despicable, Why take satisfaction when others suffer?
I wish the world was a better place, Everyone having some common sense and decency, How can come the day they face, Not even showing some shame or humility?
Good natured people always get some crap, It's annoying and irritating, yet reality, I hate it like the plague I admit, I wish we could just go along peacefully.
I don't comprehend the necessity, Why must people do so much wrong, I cry for the sake of humanity, Why can't we all just get along?
Hang in there Lil' Bro, Big Bro's here to help you through this, And right now all I know, Is that I wish for your happiness.
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Post by Jacobyoshi on Apr 20, 2005 5:13:32 GMT -5
That is very sweet and touching, great job YW!
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Post by yro Pedward on Apr 20, 2005 6:33:09 GMT -5
Well, I'm not much into peotry, but you have a good heart there YW. Nice!
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Post by red.yoshi on Apr 20, 2005 18:12:04 GMT -5
nice yw, nice!
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Post by Yoshee&Champ on Apr 20, 2005 22:35:39 GMT -5
^_^ that was very touching, YW. I couldn't have wrote that.
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