Self Emotions

[Dragon]

Contention actually inspired me to start doing poems, I used to but never liked them, and he said I should try doing one using emotion, and this is what I came up with. Let me know if it's any good.

Self Emotions

There are times I want to help out,
other times not so much,
times I want to sit and pout,
and times I want to give a crutch.

I have my days of selfishness,
I will not deny that,
but I also have days of selflessness,
where I don't act like a spoiled brat.

I think it's just so funny,
how things are able to work out,
whether or not I have money,
whether or not in bliss I shout.

How a life can change on the dot,
completely in the other direction,
how I can let the bad stuff rot,
under the ground without a mention.

I like how it feels though,
to be different overnight,
I feel like saying "Woah.",
and charge in without a fight.

Now my brain is on the fritz,
can't think of anything more,
can't think of something that rhymes in "itz",
I'll end so you to death I won't bore.

[Lord of the Dance]

Lol, great job! You're pretty good

[Enrique]

It's kind of humorous! Great job, Dragon!

[contention]

Hey Dragon, Great job on this poem in general, you got your emotions across and the title really fits in with what you were feeling, I say this is great and I love it a lot! Keep up the poetry all right, and let those emotions flow

[Dragon]

Aw thanks you guys, I wasn't too sure when I first wrote it. Thanks for the comments guys! Anything I need to imrpove on? I know there is I just don't know what it is... am I making any sense?

[red.yoshi]

heh,great job dragon! it sounds like a rap song!