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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Jul 28, 2005 21:01:48 GMT -5
i forget what this type is called,here is one of team chaos wind
C hoatic
H unters
O bliterate
A ny
S traglers
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W hile
I ntercepting
N ew
D ata
tell me what you think
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 28, 2005 21:03:14 GMT -5
Lol, good job. I have trouble with that kind of poem.
I just forgot the name of it XD.
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Post by Enrique on Jul 28, 2005 21:06:10 GMT -5
Good job, LD! I can't remeber the name of that type of poem either...
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Post by contention on Jul 28, 2005 21:10:52 GMT -5
That would be an Acrostic Poem, not Alphabetic seeing as the letters are not going in order but in a form to make words with what you have following after. Also great Job there LD! I like it.
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Post by Dragon on Jul 28, 2005 21:29:55 GMT -5
Heheh, that was neat, I have a hard time doing those. To be honest I can't think of anything you'd need to improve on, I like it alot!
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Post by Vizsual on Jul 29, 2005 9:04:01 GMT -5
Acrostic, Yes, Correct.
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An acrostic (from the late Greek akro'stichon, composed by a'kros, "extreme", and sti'chos, "verse") is a poem or some other text written in an alphabetic script, in which the first letter, syllable or word of each verse, paragraph, or some other recurring feature in the text spells out another message.
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I got this from Wikipedia again!
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Post by red.yoshi on Jul 29, 2005 19:05:28 GMT -5
very good ld *claps.* where did you get the name, chaos wind?
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Jul 29, 2005 20:00:11 GMT -5
playing sonic heroes too much,especially team chaotix's story
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Post by Not-Garr on Aug 4, 2005 12:23:46 GMT -5
I noticed, it's really not that good either. It could really use some work, and if you forgot, this is a Yoshi board....
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Aug 4, 2005 22:48:30 GMT -5
two problems with your statment rage
1. it an acrostic poem,not a fancy one one that every one else makes
2. its the general writing section,not the yoshi writing forum
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Aug 11, 2005 7:33:53 GMT -5
Neatness! Only problem is that you spelled "chao" and "chaotic" with the O before the A.
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Aug 11, 2005 19:41:43 GMT -5
dang oh well,i'm human
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Post by yoshicreator on Aug 11, 2005 19:50:12 GMT -5
I made an acrostic...unfortunately it is very morbid, if I posted it........it would be sort of gruesome and dark, all my poetry is, and the funny thing is that doesn't even reflect who I am. I'm not gothic or wiccan I'm normal and upbeat, but aww well what can I say?  ~*YC*~ |
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