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Titanic
Jul 30, 2005 22:41:28 GMT -5
Post by Dragon on Jul 30, 2005 22:41:28 GMT -5
Yeah, it's based on the old ship that sank in 1912. I only make one reference to the movie by James Cameron, otherwise I'm talking about the real one. I plan to make another one, more detailed and longer, but wanted opinions on this one first. I actually did this when I was in a Titanic "phase" so to speak, where I was completely fascinated by the whole thing, had dreams about it for a few days too. Anyway, hope you guys like it!
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Titanic
Just to lay eyes on it, and walk on the decks of old, to know she'll never split, the tragic story never be told.
To save all of those lives, and add more than enough life boats, help husbands, children, and wives, and to feed all of their throats.
I'd love to walk on that Grand Staircase, and relax in an elegant Turkish Bath, with some water splash my face, and not contend with the iceberg's wrath.
I'd be like Jack and run to the bow, see the dolphins jump and do a trick, I'd yell "Hey just look at me now! I'm sailing on the good ole' Titanic!"
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Titanic
Jul 30, 2005 23:29:23 GMT -5
Post by Zippy on Jul 30, 2005 23:29:23 GMT -5
I love the Titanic and always will. Hey have you seen the pics of it that I drew? They're in the other art section from a few weeks ago, titled Ship of Dreams. Anyways, nice poem. Great Job! Do another.
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Titanic
Jul 31, 2005 6:58:43 GMT -5
Post by Enrique on Jul 31, 2005 6:58:43 GMT -5
Great job, Dragon!
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Titanic
Jul 31, 2005 11:51:11 GMT -5
Post by Lord of the Dance on Jul 31, 2005 11:51:11 GMT -5
It would be cool to be on the Titanic... if it hadn't sunk XD Great job! You're a fine poet
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Titanic
Jul 31, 2005 13:49:22 GMT -5
Post by UMS Author Lava on Jul 31, 2005 13:49:22 GMT -5
That had me playing the Titanic theme in my head!
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Titanic
Jul 31, 2005 15:53:06 GMT -5
Post by Dragon on Jul 31, 2005 15:53:06 GMT -5
I love the Titanic and always will. Hey have you seen the pics of it that I drew? They're in the other art section from a few weeks ago, titled Ship of Dreams. Anyways, nice poem. Great Job! Do another. Oh wow, your art is phenominal, great stuff! I could never draw it, well did just not very well. And you know what's ironic? I thought about calling this poem Ship of Dreams but ended up changing it to Titanic.
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