It Ended

[Not-Garr]

I've sorta been feeling down lately, as some of you have likely noticed. It's because I've been missing my best friend ever since we lost contact... I finally just wrote it all out into a poem, that I both hope will live up to the standards Contention's poems do. XD... And because I hope it'll explain my strange moods.

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It Ended:

My best friend,
we were inseperable,
like brothers we were,
then in the blink of an eye,
it ended.

A mere twist of fate,
and our friendship became impossible,
so close and so far away,
sometimes I cry,
wondering why,
it ended.

I remember the careless days,
we spent having fun,
when my life was sunshine,
when yours was well,
when we hung out together,
and now I cry,
because you were the only real friend I had,
before the shroud fell,
it all went to Hell,
it ended.

[Lord of the Dance]

That's sad... Great poem, though. I hope you can make more friends, and feel better.

[teh yoshi]

Man, I'm really sorry to hear about that... I just hope someday you'll get back in contact with your friend.
I like this poem because it's not really meant to rhyme, and it has a repeating line for emphasis. The point with poetry is to release your feelings by means of language and perhaps with some literary skill, giving it more depth, but not so much as to force yourself into putting too much effort into something gimmicky such as rhyming and whatnot.

[Enrique]

That is quite unfortunate... I hope that you can sort it out with your friend soon... Great job, by the way.

[red.yoshi]

wow rage. this poem has a very deep and a touching meaning inside it. life goes on though. mabye you will see that friend again someday...