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Post by Zippy on Aug 4, 2005 23:40:20 GMT -5
The Legend
There was a man that will always be known, by his name, number, and heroic tone. His driving style upon which he was famed, caused trouble for drivers and him the same. He raced his way to seven titles, and on his way became an idol. It all concluded at his favorite race, but the fans didn't know what they'd face. The legand, the man, was here no more, and all the fans would forever mourn. Above all the others he will stand, we'll always remember, forever the man.
This poem is about Dale Earnhardt Sr.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 4, 2005 23:41:34 GMT -5
Nice. Good job with the writing, it made it flow a little easier. ;D
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Post by Enrique on Aug 5, 2005 7:36:51 GMT -5
Great job, Yonie! It seems to flow very well!
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Post by Yoshifrog on Aug 5, 2005 22:40:41 GMT -5
Cool Yonie! Dale rocks! Great job, you are an excellent poet!!!
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Post by red.yoshi on Aug 6, 2005 10:23:47 GMT -5
same comments as your last poem, this is great yonie!
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