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Post by Kasen on Aug 11, 2005 17:26:18 GMT -5
looking at you with all my heart knowing this will never start to hear your name it makes me sigh everyday im wondering why I love someone as much as I do someone I never touched or even knew allways pondering if you ever saw me the way I see you lol I wrote this in study hall b/c I was really really really bored...Its not about anyone either it just popped in my head..XD
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 11, 2005 19:56:23 GMT -5
It's sweet. Great job. I like the rhyming that I could never hope to do XD
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Post by Enrique on Aug 11, 2005 20:03:56 GMT -5
It's kinda touching. I like how you put the emotion in it. Great job!
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Post by yoshicreator on Aug 11, 2005 20:20:44 GMT -5
Very Nice!
~*YC*~
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Post by Dragon on Aug 11, 2005 21:10:45 GMT -5
Indeed, I like it, the emotion used is very nice. Keep up the nice work Kasen!
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Post by red.yoshi on Aug 12, 2005 17:33:05 GMT -5
short, nice, and touching! great job cherry!
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Post by Kasen on Aug 13, 2005 11:29:50 GMT -5
Ahahahhahaha lol im not cherry, that would be my sister...it was I Kasen lol...thats just funny, but thanks all for the comments if I ever get really bored again ill try to write more..XD
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