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Post by Kasen on Aug 16, 2005 14:47:54 GMT -5
well im just gonna make a thread for all my poetry, even though I dont write to much ;D
I finally got to know you I have even started to care these feelings that im having are to hard to bare I dont know if I love you or am I just having a little crush but all I am waiting for is just to feel your touch before I go to sleep your the one in my head your the one I dream about when im lying in my bed I want to tell you everthing b/c I know your someone I can trust Im sorry for being shy and not knowing what to say but all I want to know is if your feeling the same way I know this is sudden and you probably will never know but if you read this poem, and fill this way tell me b/c I am waiting for your call everyday..
lol i just did this poem in like 3 mins. so its not good lol XD
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Aug 17, 2005 16:04:50 GMT -5
Mario: It'sa me, Mario! Your poem inspired me to sweep up Peach's foyer unasked! Peach saw how considerate it was that me and her are hitched! Woo-hoo!
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Post by Kasen on Aug 18, 2005 13:00:53 GMT -5
^_^ yay it inspired someone lol...I was thinking about changing the 2nd to last line to" but if you read this poem, and have something to say"......do you think I should or not
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Post by red.yoshi on Aug 22, 2005 10:20:59 GMT -5
your not so bad kasen! your pretty good! it sounds like a love letter = o. mabye somthing to stick in someones locker X D! jk. nice pome kasen!
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