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Post by melons on Sept 18, 2005 19:09:02 GMT -5
Yoshi of course
Orange yoshi
Super mairo world
Happy yoshi!
Ice toshi XD
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Post by Yin on Sept 18, 2005 19:15:17 GMT -5
Ummm, that's ummm... okay. Needs maybe a few words here and a few words there... and what's up with that GIGANTIC space near the end?
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Post by melons on Sept 18, 2005 19:38:58 GMT -5
Yeah sorry about that space i acindently messed it up i just thought i whould give a poem a try didnt go so well ehh?
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Post by moshi5694 on Sept 20, 2005 16:08:02 GMT -5
It's actually good I guess.If you look at it,the begining letters spell yoshi so it has to be short.But it could of been a tad bit longer and the space is gynormus.LEVEL UP ! !
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Post by dancingyoshi on Oct 1, 2005 19:01:39 GMT -5
Well, I think you could of come up with some more creative lines, since Yoshi is a very short word.
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Post by yoshicreator on Oct 5, 2005 17:30:21 GMT -5
I think you meant it to be a sense poem, but it is a little off! Add to it, it is way too short, and random. Just fix it up and it'd be fine!
Sorry...
~*YC*~!
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