Two New Friends.

[Dragon]

Since I've been making friends recently, I thought I'd do a small poem for them. ^_^
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Two New Friends

Wow this is new,
I'm making new friends now,
hand me a tissue,
I can only saw "wow".

Graedius is one of whom,
has become a recent friend,
we should talk more soon,
to you my time I'd lend.

A new one is YW,
we've been getting aquainted,
you know I'd never trouble you,
your respect is un-tainted.

I know this poem is short,
so please forgive me for that,
my ship has docked at port,
to you guys I tip my hat.

[yoshicreator]

It sounds very much like how my sister writes her poetry...which is a good thing. I'm glad you can express your feelings in writing! And do it well too. But I was confused by the last quatrain, what about boats? That lost me , sorry, otherwise it is good!

~*YC*~

[Dragon]

It was a figure of speech, since I was done with the poem, I compared it to a boat docking at port, since it's done with it's voyage. XD, sorry about the confusion!

[yoshicreator]

That is what I assumed, but I just wanted to make sure!

~*YC*~