Slowly Drifting Away

[Sky]

I don't recall if it's been done in the General Writing sub-forum, if not, well, this is gonna be the first then. This is a song which I compose the lyrics, and no, I have no talent to make insruments and beat for it, so use your imagination, heh. It's not a happy song, but hey, lots aren't either, so LEVEL UP ! !

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Slowly Drifting Away - YW/Rex A.K.A. Nick

Days and days just pass on by
Slowly ponder what's to come
Walking down the path of life
Feeling much and feeling nil
My sole purpose, sole redemption
My only point of existance
Being pulled out of my grasp
Out of reach and far away

Never enough the things we say!
Never enough the things we do!
Is it a curse or is it fate?
I'm slowly drifting away..
We talk 'bout this and about that!
Though feels like words and nothing more!
Is it a curse or is it fate?
I'm slowly drifting away..

Why has there been this harsh change?
Things like this should grow and grow
Not slam the brakes and hit reverse
'coming a shadow of its former self
Or is it I that has changed so?
Pointing the blame left and right?
Whoever in the end's to blame
The feeling's more than just a dream.

Never enough the things we say!
Never enough the things we do!
Is it a curse or is it fate?
I'm slowly drifting away..
We talk 'bout this and about that!
Though feels like words and nothing more!
Is it a curse or is it fate?
I'm slowly drifting away..

People lie to ease the pain
Goes to prove that truth dos hurt
But how can we become closer
When we hide behind false words?
As the clock goes ticking down
My will, My soul is growing weak
Slowly crushed by my own thoughts
Of ending up losing y'all..

Never enough the things we say!
Never enough the things we do!
Is it a curse or is it fate?
I'm slowly drifting away..
We talk 'bout this and about that!
Though feels like words and nothing more!
Is it a curse or is it fate?
I'm slowly drifting away..

I'm slowly...... drifting...... away.......

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Well, comments/critique is more than welcome, this is a rather rough draft, I'm sure there's much room for improvement, especially considering it's my first song writing LEVEL UP ! !

[UMS Author Lava]

Is this on death or something?
'Cuz I get that dark sense of foreboding.

[Yoshifrog]

Wow, that's very deep and descriptive! Great job YW!

[Enrique]

I really like it YW! A lot of emotion circulates in the song as you read it, and it reaches your heart in a certain way. I think there is a valuable theme to the song, but I can't quite put my finger on it... Anyway, awesome job, YW!

[Lord of the Dance]

That song has a deep meaning indeed. Very well done, YW. *claps*
It kinda does feel like that sometimes...

By the way, is there a reason you changed you name? Just asking.